四、现象解释型常用句式
①Asisdescribedinthe chart/graph/table/picture，inthepastfewyearsthere is a marked increase in…./there has been a dramatic change in…./therehave/has arisen a sharp decrease in….
虽然人们普遍认为…，但是…仍然是不正确的。
⑮It will exert／have／produceprofound／far-reaching／remarkable／considerable／beneficial／favorable／undesirable／disastrous effect／influence On．．．
阐述观点段／说明问题段
⑨Nodoubt／Frommypointofview对该现象做出整体评价．⑩However，可能存在的问题/Itisworthnotingthat应该注意的事项.⑪进一步描述问题或注意事项．⑫Allinall/Therefore，总结全文．
//⑨As tome／From my pointofview，对该现象做出整体评价、对现象的发展做出预测或提出建议(but指出注意事项／提出建议)⑩Foronething，评价一/建议一.⑪For another，评价二/建议二.⑫To conclude／In a word，总结全文
阐述观点段／说明问题段
⑨该现象的好处或重要地位
⑩可能存在的问题／应该注意的事项
⑪进一步描述问题或注意事项
⑫总结全文，呼应主题
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⑨对该现象做出整体评价、对现象的发展做出预测或提出建议(，but后引出注意事项／提出建议)
⑩作出评价一／提出建议一
⑪作出评价二／提出建议二
⑫总结全文，呼应主题
2.模板演示
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition onthe topicHarmfulness of Fake Commodities. You shouldwrite atleast 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
现象解释型
模板三
1.模板学习
Topic
描述现象段
①Nowadays/In recent years/In modern
Society总述现象．②现象表现一／Themainreasonfor该现象is原因一．/Why产生这种现象？Onereasonis原因一③Moreover/Inaddition，现象表现二/原因二isanimportantfactor/reasonfor该现象./原因二
如图所示，在过去的几十年中，…急剧增长/变化/减少
②The chart／graph／table／picturedescribesthatthefiguredeclines／falls／drops smoothly／markedly. Itindicatesthat…
图表显示数字下降平缓／明显，这表明…。
可能有好几个因素造成／负责／解释…。
⑦Theremaybeseveralpossiblereasonsfortheproblemwhichwillbedemonstrated below．
可能有几个原因导致了我们下面所要阐述的问题。
⑧It'snoeasy／simpletasktoofferthereasonsforthisphenomenonwhichinvolves more than one complicated factor．
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述社会上存在很多假冒伪劣商品的现象；分析假冒伪劣商品泛滥的原因；说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人及社会等的危害。
模板套用：
Harmfulness of Fake Commodities
①Nowadays, there are many fake commodities in the marketplace, which range from daily commodities to expensive goods.②Why are there so many fake ones? One reason is that people can make a bigger profit from selling fake commodities since their costs are lower than that of real ones.③In addition,my consumers are willing to buy the cheaper products, which potentially stimulates the increase of fake commodities. (描述现象段)
标题
描述现象段
①开门见山，总述现象
②描述现象的突出表现一/直接陈述现象产生的原因一/用设问句引出现象产生的原因并列举原因一
③描述现象的突出表现二/列举原因二
说明影响段
④总述现象带来的影响
⑤列举最重要的影响
⑥举例说明或直接进一步说明该影响
⑦列举影响二
⑧列举影响三(如前面两点影响比较典型，也可不列举第三点)
④As everyone sees, fake commodities have brought great negative effect on both the individual and the society.⑤Above all, fake medicine and food threaten consumers' health seriously.⑥For example, many drinkers' eyes are blinded by drinking fake alcohol.⑦What's more, a large quantity of fake commodities in the marketplace cause unfair competition and put the market economy in disorder.⑧In addition, with so many Chinese fake commodities being exported overseas, the reputation for goods made in China will be ruined.(说明影响段)
我们被赋予新的机会，并且面临着新的挑战。
⑪It is commonly believed that...，is the inevitable result of...
人们普遍认为，…是…的必然结果。
⑫While the rhythm／pace／tempo of people's living is speeding up，a lot of
根据…发表的／所做的一份调查／分析／统计数栅报告，…的数目呈上
升／下降的趋势。
⑤Recently，theproblemof……hasbecomethefocusofthepublicconcern．
近来，…问题引起公众极大的关注。
⑥There maybe a combinationoffactors which contribute to／are responsiblefor／explain．．．
1)目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fakecommodities)。为什么会有这种现象?
2)举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害。
写作思路：本文属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出一种现象，并要求分析现象产生的原因，提纲第2点要求说明这种现象带来的影响，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
③Inthechart／graph／table／picture，wecanseethattherewasaslight／marked fluctuation．Itreveals that….
在图表中，我们可以看到有细枷很明gtoa(n)survey／investigation／analysis／statistics／report released／conducted／madeby…，thereisagrowing／increasing／decliningnumberof........who／which....
它将会对…产生深远的／显著的／有益的／不良的／灾难性的影响。
⑯Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern．
最近这个现象引起了广泛关注。
(17)It is high time that we put an end to…
该是我们停止…的时候了。
Whichisalsoresponsiblefor该现象
说明影响段
④(As everyone sees/Undoubtedly，)该现象has/have brought/is/are bringing/can bring great/negative effect/influence(On影响对象)/damage/benefits(to影响对象)/现象涉及的主体canbenefit a lotfrom该现象．⑤Aboveall，影响一.⑥(Forexample，)进一步说明影响一.⑦What'smore，影响二．⑧Inaddition／Besides，影响三．
changes have taken place in...
人民生活节奏加快的同时，…也发生了很多变化
⑬From what has been discussed above，we may safely draw the conclusion that．．．