2018年北京中考一模范文亮点表达汇总
2018年北京中考一模作文范文表达亮点汇总
西城一模
作文一（说明原因，给出建议）：1. as my target subjects.
2.They are chosen because I love them more than other subjects.（亮点：被动语态、比较级句型）
3.be attractive to sb
4.expand my interest in this subject
5.most importantly,
6.think independently （运用高级副词）
7.make great progress
作文二（遇见美）：1. On the giant screen in front of me, a true story from history and amazing filmmaking came together to give me a very meaningful experience.
2.It is/ was as if（好像） + 句子
3.setback n. 挫折
4.impressive adj. 令人印象深刻的
5.leave me a beautiful memory that I will never forget
东城一模
作文一（推荐参加毕业典礼的节目）：1. bring back our sweet memories
作文二（我爱我的班集体）：1. sign up for 报名参加
2.be busy doing sth、be busy with sth
2.
3.To build/gain confidence
4.It is the most important that + 句子：最重要的是……
It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do.
5.make it = achieve success
朝阳一模
作文一（春游）；1. have a long-distance walking race from the school gate to the top of a hill
2.have prizes for beautiful pictures of the outing
作文二（My Dream Job）：1. It is so much fun doing sth. 做某事非常有趣。

3.Children are always creative and they surprise you all the time.
4.teach knowledge to my students
5.develop my communication skills
6.be able to do sth
石景山一模
作文一（自荐信）1. I think I am the right person because I have many strong points.
2.It’s great chance to widen my eyes.
3.It’s my honor to introduce our Chinese history and culture to foreign friends.
作文二（我最难忘的班级活动）：1. it was the first time for us to have a riding trip.
丰台一模
作文一（邀请信：英语读书会活动）1. have an English play
2.We strongly hope you will come and join us.
3.give us some precious advice on this activity
作文二（建设绿色校园）:1. take actions
2.not only ……but also……
3.collect the waste on the playground
4.It takes/ took/ will take sb + 时间+to do sth.
房山一模
作文一（邀请信：参加演讲比赛）1. topic
2.sign up by telephone or on the school website
3.prepare PPTs and printed paper for the teachers
4.finish your speech in 5 minutes
5.I wish you good luck.
作文二（My unforgettable journey）1. have a good / great / wonderful time = have fun = enjoy oneself
2.go boating/ swimming/ shopping/hiking/climbing/fishing/camping
/skiing/skating
3.eat seafood
4.The most exciting thing is to see the sunrise.
5.When the sun rose from the east,
6.They can be my best memories.
门头沟一模
作文一（邀请信：感受中国的传统文化）1. watch magic show
作文二（英语听说机考的经验介绍、建议）1. retell the passage according to the notes
2.pay more attention to your pronunciation
3.Practice retelling
4.Practice makes perfect.
5.Wish you success.
平谷一模
作文一（英语阅读体会）：1. fast reading and careful reading 快读和精度
作文二（Good Learning Habits）1. get everything ready for the class
2.After class, I often review what I learned in class.
3.have a good time/ fun/ difficulty/ trouble/ problems (in) doing sth
顺义一模
作文一（邀请外教：学生才艺展示中华民族传统文化）1. The talent show is about Chinese traditional culture.
2.beautiful works of paper-cuts
3.have a long history
4.The talent show aims to spread Chinese traditional culture. 作文二（贵在坚持）1. be too +形容词/副词+ to do sth 太……而不能……
2.overcome the difficulty、solve the problem
3.take an active part in 积极参加
燕山一模
作文一（邀请美国网友去北京植物园）：1. have a picnic in the open air
2.It will be a lot of fun having you join us.
作文二（Ways of Communication Today）:1. talking face to face、sing songs、using body and sign language、writing a letter、chatting on line、sending text message、making phone calls
3.with the help of
4.keep in touch with。