写作指导 Let’s go for it!
basic structure (基本结构的安排)
Let’s go for it!
Dear Mr. Know，
I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you
some problems we meet in English study. (the beginning)
• A lot of people travel. • Some people stay at home. • Some other people visit friends
or parents. • A few people work. • Enjoy your vacation.
加(add)
• 加首尾，使结构完整。 • 可以采取总分总结构，开头或
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
美(beautify)
According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.
• I have a happy family. There are 3 people in my famil • I have lots of hobbies. _F_o_r__e_x_a_m__p_le_,I
enjoy_n_o_t_o_n__ly_singing _b__u_t_a_l_s_o_ collecting stamps. • Now, I study in Class 1, Grade 3, Bayi High School. M
（正文） meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.
Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不 用说)answer the questions about them. But the most
generally speaking, in short
用适当的连词连接文段
• My name is Tom. I am 15 years old. _A_s__f_o__r___ my appearances, I am tall a__n_d_ I wear glasses. _A__s__fo__r_ my personalities, I am shy _b_u_t__friendly.
First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think
studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so
difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots
next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
我们应该保护环境。
A We should protect the environment. B It’s our duty to protect the environment.
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法二:活用多种句型
她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。
A She is very young. She can’t carry the heavy box.
பைடு நூலகம்
Which is better?
最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。
A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.
我认为学英语很有趣。
A I think learning English is interesting. B I find it really fun to learn English .
Let’s try
• T_h_o_u_g_h_\A__lt_h_o_ug_h_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.
• He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert _in_s_t_e_ad_.
• We like doing kinds of sports __li_ke__ swimming, running and hiking.
Which is better?
我希望你能帮助我。
A I wish you can help me. B I’m looking forward to your help.
Which is better?
他们很早就到了。
A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.
B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she can’t carry the … D She is not old enough to carry the…
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法三:妙用关联词
结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。
加(add beginning and ending)
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
（the beginning）
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
on the one hand…on the other hand 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly),
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
中考英语书面表达
萍钢中学
中考英语作文8个话题
一、介绍人 （自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人
感受等） 二、介绍地点 （旅游等） 三、校园生活 （春游、校规、科目、学习困难等） 四、课外生活 （家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好 等） 五、假期安排 （计划、过去经历等） 六、节假日活动 （志愿者活动、过去经历） 七、环境、健康 （环保、疾病、食品健康等） 八、个人观点建议 （提建议、劝告等）
difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and
sentences.
Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please
give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to
关联词(connection words)
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor
2.表示选择: or, either…or 3.表示转折: but,however,although\though,after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way,
of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study.
the body And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t
favorite subject is math. __B_e_s_i_d_e_s__, I am interested in English,Chinese,physics __a_n_d__s_o__o_n__. I live far from school _s_o__ I usually get up at 6:00 and go to school by subway. • I_n_a__w__o_r_d, I have a busy _b_u__t _wonderful life.