中考英语作文写好作文五要素:要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点1.要点:缺少要点就会扣分。
所以要点要做到全,围绕中心。
2.结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。
三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话第二段:可以分析原因。
第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。
但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。
也可以提出希望和建议等。
3.逻辑:通过使用逻辑词体现文章的思路。
4.语法:语法是硬性的。
如单词的使用,时态等要注意。
5.亮点:高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。
所以一般词汇要限量用。
如何开头1. “开门见山”式开头一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
①对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。
如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是:Last month,my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us。
②对于论述性的文章,可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点,接着展开进一步的论述。
如“The Time and the Money(时间和金钱)”的开头可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don't think so. First,when money is used up,you can earn it back,but……2. 回忆性开头在描述事件或游记类的文章中,采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。
这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇,如never forget (永远无法忘记)、remember (记得)、unforgettable (难以忘怀的)、exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)……如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写:I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had。
3. 疑问性开头在叙事类或论述性的文章中,都可采用疑问型开头,这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。
如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是:Have you ever planted trees? Don't you think planting trees is…… 再如“Traveling Abroa d (出国之旅)”的开头可以是:If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?4. 倒叙式开头在有的文章,特别是叙事类的文章中,可以采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事件的结果,再陈述过程。
如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写:I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It's a …… story。
开头经典句子1. 不用说…… It goes without saying that … = (It is) needless to say (that) …. = It is obvious that ….例:不用说早睡早起是值得的。
It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.2. 在各种……之中,…… Among various kinds of …… /= Of all the …, …例︰在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。
Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.3. 就我的看法……;我认为……In my opinion, … = To my mind, ….= As far as I am concerned, …= I am of the opinion that ….例:In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。
4. 随着人口的增加…… With the increase/growth of the population, …随着科技的进步…… With the advance of science and technology, …例:With the rapid development of Taiwan’s economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass.随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。
5. ……是必要的It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that ………是重要的It is important / essential (for sb.) to do / that ………是适当的It is proper (for sb.) to do / that ………是紧急的It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that …例:It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean.我们应当保持公共场所清洁。
6. As we know, we students are very tired because of study.7. Just as the saying goes: “Every coin has its two sides”,television has both advantages and disadvantages.正像谚语所说:“任何硬币都有两面”,电视即有优点也有缺点。
8. The problem of ...is important/serious/...to us. Now let me talk something about it.9. It is said that + 句子据说… It is reported that + 句子据报道…10. We' re often told that ......But is this really the case ?我们经常被告知......但事实真是这样吗?11. People used to ......however, things are quite different today.过去,人们习惯......但,今天的情况有很大的不同。
12. Some people think that ......Others believe that the opposite is true. There is probably some truth in both sides. But we must realize that...一些人认为......另一些人持相反意见。
也许双方的观点都有一定道理。
但是我们必须认识到...... 13. 每当我听到……我就忍不住感到兴奋。
Whenever I hear …, I cannot but feel excited.每当我做……我就忍不住感到悲伤。
Whenever I do …, I cannot but feel sad.每当我想到……我就忍不住感到紧张。
Whenever I think of …, I cannot but feel nervous.每当我遭遇……我就忍不住感到害怕。
Whenever I meet with …, I cannot but feel frightened.每当我看到……我就忍不住感到惊讶。
Whenever I see …, I cannot but feel surprised.例:Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad.= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad.每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲伤。
14. ……the + ~ est + 名词+(that)+ 主词+ have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc) /……the most + 形容词+ 名词+(that)+ 主词+ have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had. 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
Yao Ming is the tallest basketball player that I have ever seen. 姚明是我所见过的最高的篮球运动员Liu Xiang is the most hardworking sportsman that I have ever seen. 刘翔是我所见过的最勤奋的运动员。
15. Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V / Nothing is + more + 形容词+ than to + VNothing is more important than to receive education. 没有比接受教育更重要的事。