2.8 书面表达投诉信-2020年高考英语专题训练系列投诉信【文体概述】投诉信是人们在遇到一些不文明现象、所购商品质量差、售后服务不满意等情况下解决问题的一个方法。
投诉信应包括三个方面的内容: 1. 表明写信目的:投诉的内容; 2. 投诉的具体原因; 3. 希望得到的结果。
在语言方面,要注意把握分寸,要公平、公正。
【常用语块】1. 抱怨_________________________________2. 表达不满_________________________________3. 忍受_________________________________4. 对……满意_________________________________5. 糟糕的服务_________________________________6. 采取措施_________________________________7. 解决问题_________________________________8. 预防……发生_________________________________9. 调查此次事件_________________________________10. 以粗鲁的方式_________________________________11. 向……道歉_________________________________12. 出乎意料_________________________________13. 不用说_________________________________14. 尽快_________________________________15. 把某事牢记在心_________________________________【套用句式】1. 我写信是投诉关于……___________________________________________________________________________2. 这几年我对你们的服务都很满意但是我写信是表达关于……的不满。
___________________________________________________________________________3. 有一些主要原因为什么我对……不满意。
首先,……。
更糟糕的是,……。
最后,……。
___________________________________________________________________________4. 我真诚地希望你能认真调查这件事情以及采取恰当的措施,防止类似事件再次发生。
___________________________________________________________________________5. 你若能尽快采取措施处理这个问题,我将感激不尽。
___________________________________________________________________________【短文改错】(做短文改错,背经典范文)Dear Sir,I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction about the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought in 20th Apr. 2015t text messages. Then I took them to the seller, but was toldat Teemall. Ten days before that, it didn’t ring or senthat the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three month for a new one. Later I went to the repairman. He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossibly to fix it without the right spare parts. I wasso desperate on hear that. What can I wait that long? Therefore, I sincerely hope you can send to me a new one of same model. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take measures to solve the problem as soon as possible.Sincerely yours,Bu Manyi 【课堂练习】假定你是李华,上周六,你有一次不愉快的就餐经历,对餐厅的服务员态度非常不满意。
于是你给该餐厅老板写一封投诉信。
要点如下:1. 问题:牛肉面有苍蝇,服务员态度粗鲁。
2. 要求:餐厅赔礼道歉。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir,I am Li Hua, a frequent customer in your restaurant.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I look forward to a better service next time.Sincerely yours,Li Hua【课外作业】假定你是李华,你在上周日搭坐102号公车。
该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很愤怒。
于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信。
要点如下:1. 司机的不文明行为(大声讲话、紧急刹车、态度粗鲁等);2. 希望尽快查清此事。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir,I am Li Hua. I am writing to complain about__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely yours,Li Hua投诉信常用语块1. complain about2. convey/express one’s dissatisfaction3. put up with/bear4. be content/satisfied with5. poor service6. take measures7. deal with/solve the problem8. prevent…from happening9. investigate/look into the matter/incident10. in a rude manner11. make an apology to…/apologize to…12. out of one’s expectation13. needless to say14. as soon as possible15. bear sth. in mind套用句式1. I am writing to complain about...2. I have been content/satisfied with your service for years but I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about…… Eventually, …3. There are some main reasons why I am not content with… At first,… What’s worse,4. I sincerely hope that/It is my sincere hope that you will look into/investigate the matter /incident seriouslyand proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.5. I would appreciate it very much if you could take measures to deal with/solve the problem as soon as possible.短文改错作者写信向商家投诉,表达对所买手机的不满。
1. in→on 具体到某一天用介词on。
2. before→after 根据句子的逻辑意义,应该是“十天后”,故用after。