例２．
Write an English composition in over 120 words on the picture and instructions given (2002上海高考题）
1. 描述图片 In the picture, we can see that when a child is learning to ride bicycle, the parents and grandparents are sweating, running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protect the child for fear that she should fall and hurt herself.
４．总结 In conclusion, the path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles. Only when kids depend on themselves rather than their parents can they get mature and face everything with confidence and courage in the future.
2.陈述此图片反映的社会现象 Due to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is regarded as the treasure of the whole family. Both the parents and grandparents usually spoil the child too much.
It can be seen from the picture that…
According to the above picture, we can see that…
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
In this picture we can see a girl learning to ride a bike with her parents and even grand-parents running around her, sweating. Obviously, they intend to protect the child, for fear that she might fall off the get hurt.
右边一幅图
1.有一天，小明母亲看到倒在地上的瓶子 2.小明说： “我扶了，你会说是我碰倒的”
右边一幅图 1.Another day, the mother saw the fallen oil bottle on the ground. 2.Xiao Ming said to his mother, (注意小明的话要用虚拟语气) “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.”
英语作文的写作技巧 之看图作文
请根据图画和所给词语的提示，叙述某天小明与 其妈妈发生的故事。然后，再根据此故事内容， 发表你自己的感想（自拟），不得少于三点想法。
开头已给出。 One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over._____________________________ _________
３．表明自己的观点和想法, 提出建议
As this phenomena has been becoming a fierce social issue, Many measures can be taken to prevent it getting more and more serious。As to parents, it’s better for them to provide guidance as well as opportunities for kids to fall and fail, as they are recognized as an inevitable way to grow up. While for the children, it’s high time that they learned to say no to their parents’ unnecessary protection. At the same time, young as they are, they should make parents believe they are old enough to accumulate(累积) practical experience in real life and prepare themselves for the future. They should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves and are able to exist in the competitive community without the constant watchful eye of an eager parent.
二、谈感想 1.我对小明母亲在上述图中所述故事中的做 法看法：不同意 2.我想： ①父母应该为孩子树立好榜样 ②父母不仅要关心孩子的身体，还要关心 他们的思想 ③父母应该让孩子知道帮助处在困难中的 人是一件快乐的事。因为我们生活在社会 这个大家庭中。
１．I disagree with what the mother did in the story. 2. ①I think parents should set a good example to their children . ②They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds. ③They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. Because we live in the society which is a big family for all of us.
Due to the one-child policy, the only kids in many families are considered as kings or queens. The parents, consciously or unconsciously, have offered too much help and make too many decisions for the kids, which definitely spoil the children. As a result, children become so dependent and incapable that they may find it hard to survive the fierce competition in future.
一、描写图片，说明所发生的事
左边一幅图
1.女孩跌倒
2.小明要帮她
3.小明的母亲阻拦他说：“不要扶，否则 人家会说是你把她碰倒的。”
如何变图片为文字 左边一幅图 1.One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. （试题中已给出） 2.Xiao Ming wanted to help the girl up. 3.His mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.”
五、增加结尾句，整理成文
One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. He wanted to help the girl up, but his mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” Another day, the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be. saying to him,“Can’t you see the fallen oil? Why can’t you straighten it up?” but Xiao Ming said to his mother, “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.” I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set a good example to their children .They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds. They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in the society which is a big family for all of us. Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right?