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Three Steps
• 1.认可对立面观点的正确性(1-2句话) Undoubtedly, a teacher’s main responsibility is to teach knowledge … • 2.用转折词进行过渡 However/Nevertheless, … • 3.给出己方鲜明的观点 Helping students to gain confidence is …
议论文是对某个问题或某件事进行分析来表明自己 的观点的一种文体; 通常为了使得该文体特征更加 突出, 就要求写作的风格精炼有条理 怎样使写作更有条理呢? • 逻辑顺序词: 表达议论文中论证 逻辑的先后顺序 • 作用信号词: 表达议论文中论证 逻辑的目的作用 • 程度修饰词: 增加议论文中论证 逻辑的严密合理性
逻辑顺序词
• Sequence First/Firstly/Initially/In the first place/To begin with/To start with, … Second/Secondly/Next/Then/In the second place, … Third/Thirdly/Lastly/Finally/Eventually, … • Causal relationship So/Accordingly/As a result, xxx. Therefore/Consequently/Hence, xxx. • Conclusion In a word/In conclusion/In brief, xxx. In short/In summary/To sum up, xxx. On the whole/To summarize, xxx.
Question
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People buy things not because they need but because others have.
Sample – Main body Nhomakorabea• Obviously, people may buy things out of the lack of sense of community belonging, also called “follow the crowd”. Consider the situation: your colleagues and friends all buy the X-box, but you don’t like games, so you have no desire for a game machine. Unfortunately , when you are with your friends and colleagues, these people around you are always talking about it, the X-box, and thenyou feel that you’ve been shut out. Under this situation, will you buy one in order to reintegrate into the environment? I will. Maybeyou don‘t need the product, but it’s very possible for you to buy it if other people have one, because it could be a bridge of communication, the common topic, between you and others
Introduction skill 3: Expressing your views
• Question • Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to achieve success than to remain happy and optimistic when you fail
Three Steps
• 1. 放大话题,引出现象 (1句话) Making friends → having social activity • 2. 用现象联系题目(1-2句话) • 3. 亮出观点,明确表明立场(1句话) People who are different can be friends.
• 同义词/近义词/词性转换: success → succeed; happy →cheerful; remain optimistic →keep up high spirits • 改换句式结构: be not daunted by failures
Main Body Skill 1: Argumentation
Sample – Introduction
(Step 1) In modern society,放大(用于具体的话题)、 像抽象,名称不可以social activity has become a vital part in our study, work and life. (Step 2) Thus, making many friends is an agreeable result of this phenomenon. Interestingly, I always experience a lot of fun from my dear friends because we often discuss different things and share disparate hobbies.自己、名 人、名言 (Step 3) Clearly, it is quite reasonable that people with different interests and personalities are more likely to become friends.
Sample – Introduction
• In modern society, success has become a buzzword in almost every area of life as more and more young people are aspiring to achieve great success and prove their worth in their chosen fields. (View expression) From my point of view, although it is important to set up targets and achieve them step by step, the ability to stay cheerful and hopeful and not to be daunted by temporary setbacks and failures is perhaps of greater significance
Introduction skill 2 : Describing a phenomenon
Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People with different interests and personalities cannot be friends.
Sample – Introduction
• (Step 1) Undoubtedly, a teacher’s main responsibility is to teach some useful knowledge to his or her students. After all, that is why our schools are established and how our educational systems are designed. (Step 2)对 前面的论点虚弱However, there are some other and perhaps more important functions of education. (Step 3) In my opinion, helping students to gain confidence in themselves is a more significant task for every teacher than merely giving them all sorts of knowledge
Practice Question
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For future career success, it is more important to relate well to other people than to study hard in school. Undoubtedly, it is significant for students to study hard in school. After all, learning knowledge from textbook is their own duty. Nevertheless, there are some other and more vital skills they are supposed to learn. As far as I am able to concerned, what is more essential is to get along well with the others. Lay a foundation in their career.
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