• My parents bought me a gift on my birthday. • 我的父母在我生日那天给我买了礼物。
• Experts predict that half of the world’s language will be extinct in 100 years. • 专家预测世界上一半语言100年后会消亡。 • Many experts doubt whether English should be used as the only global official language. • 许多专家怀疑英语是否应该作为全球唯一 的官方用语。
宾语（动词宾语）
• Media violence can affect children’s health. • 媒体暴力影响小孩的健康。 • To telecommute usually means working at home. • 远程上班通常意味着在家工作。 • Most weight losers decide to have a vegetarian diet. • 许多减肥者决定吃素。
主语 + 谓语
• Crimes fall significantly. • 犯罪大幅度下降。 • Recent figures of juvenile crime are increasing. • 最近青少年犯罪的数量在上升。 • Without guns, both suicide rate and homicide rate will go down. • 没有枪，自杀率和他杀率都会下降。
• The computer industry has been growing rapidly in the world in the last en years. • 世界计算机产业在过去几十年发展迅速。 • Dick had been smoking for ten years before he decided to give it up last year. • Dick 去年决定戒烟之前，就已经抽了十年 了。
• To telecommute usually means working at home. • 远程上班通常意味着在家工作。
• We consider greed a source of evils. • 我们认为贪婪是罪恶的源头。 • Two million were turned away by American officials. • 有200万人被美国官员拒绝入境。
宾语（介词宾语）
• The disease spread quickly across the country. • You are never a loser until you give up trying.
• I am sorry for what I said.
宾语（非谓语动词宾语）
• Taking a job for a long time is usually considered a proof of loyalty. • 长时间从事一份工作通常被认为是忠诚的表现。
• My parents bought me a gift on my birthday. • 我的父母在我生日那天给我买了礼物。 • Community services offer wrongdoers an opportunity to correct their misconduct. • 社区服务给做坏事的人一个改过自新的机会。
• How we can carry forward our traditional arts has become a hot issue. • 如何弘扬传统艺术成了个热门话题。
• What is needed in this country is stricter control of guns. • 这个国家所需要的是更严格地管理枪支。 • Who will be responsible for the senior citizens will be discussed tomorrow. • 谁对老年人负责这个问题明天将被讨论。
主语 + 谓语 +宾语
• Media violence can affect children’s health. • 媒体暴力影响小孩的健康。
• Gambling and alcohol abuse cause crimes and destruction. • 赌博和酗酒导致犯罪和毁灭。
主语 + 谓语 +间接宾语 + 直接宾语
• It is generally accepted that the Chinese civilization is one of the oldest in the world. • 人们普遍认为中国文化是世界上最古老的 文化之一。
• What effects tourism will exert on local culture are well-documented. • 旅游业对当地文化的影响是显而易见的。
谓语
• Crimes fall significantly. • 犯罪大幅度下降。 • China arrested 69,780 juvenile delinquents in 2003. • 2003年中国逮捕了69780青少年罪犯。 • Without guns, the suicide rate will go down. • 没有枪，自杀率会下降。
表语
• That a nation should protect its cultural heritage is very essential. • 国家保护文化遗产是至关重要的。 • The result of the competition is quite satisfying. • 比赛结果很令人满意。
主语 + 系动词 +表语
• Resisting a criminal with a gun is the safest thing to do. • 用枪来反抗罪犯是最安全的做法。
• The penalties for criminals should be severe. • 对罪犯的惩罚应该严厉。
• That a nation should protect its cultural heritage is very essential. • 国家保护文化遗产是至关重要的。 • It is very essential that a nation should protect its cultural heritage.
• Facing high competition, people may suffer great pressure. • 面对高度竞争，人们可能承担巨大的压力。
• Suffering great pain, cancer patients have to take some drugs sometimes. • 因为忍受巨大的痛苦，癌症病人有时不得 不服用毒品。
主语 + 谓语 +宾语 + 补语
• We consider greed a source of evils. • 我们认为贪婪是罪恶的源头。 • Parents should encourage their kids to take part in more rewarding activities. • 父母应该鼓励孩子参加更多有益的活动。
• Pornography has developed alongside technology. • 色情业随着科技发展而不断蔓延。 • TV， radio， newspaper and magazines had served as the mainstream media before the Internet was invented. • 在互联网发明之前，电视、广播、报纸、杂志是 主流媒体。 • The human race will have immigrated to another planet when the earth becomes uninhabitable. • 在地球变得不适宜居住的时候，人类已经移民到 另外的星球上去了。
• Educators advise sending children to schools instead of keeping them at home. • 教育家建议送孩子上学，而不是把他们留在家里。
• It is ridiculous to force an employee to retire at the age of 50. • 强迫员工50退休是荒唐的。 • Most weight losers decide to have a vegetarian diet. • 许多减肥者决定吃素。
rabbit.coco@来自雅思写作评分标准• • • • • • TR: Task Response 回答问题 CC: Coherence and Cohesion 连贯性及一致性 LR: Lexical Resource 词汇量
• GR: Grammatical Range and Accuracy
句子成分
• 主语、谓语、宾语、表语、定语、状语、 补语、同位语
主语
• Media violence can affect children’s health. • 媒体暴力影响小孩的健康。
• Gambling causes crimes and destruction. • 赌博导致犯罪和毁灭。
• I don’t know what is needed in learning English. • 我不知道学习英语需要做什么。
• We haven’t decided who will be responsible for the senior citizens. • 我们还没有决定由谁对老人负责。