高考应用文写作技巧(1)
2014考书信体作文的省份: 1. 【全国Ⅰ卷】咨询信 2. 【北京卷】道歉信 3. 【天津卷】介绍信 4. 【浙江卷】建议信 5. 【上海卷】建议信 6. 【安徽卷】建议信 7. 【四川卷】告知信
5. 定语从句 ① 两句并一句: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street. It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.→ The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. (全国卷) ② which指代前一句话: It was quite an experience for us both, which I’ll never forget for the rest of my life. (北京卷)
“贴近生活” “注重实际运用能力” 1考老师,2考记忆力
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斐斐点睛 虎头———猪肚———凤尾
问候 自我介绍 背景 目的
包含要点1 包含要点2 包含要点3
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格式
开头段落
1. 问候: 2. 自我介绍(同位语+定从/分词) I am LiHua, a 17-year-old boy currently studying in Xinhua high school. Born in a family of writers, I’m keen on reading novels and writing poems.
literary books. As for the reasons,…
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结尾段: Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know.
1. 我得知.. (湖北)我从网上得知你们学校提供食宿。 (天津)我从老师那儿得知你将来我校交换。 (安徽)我从你的来信中得知你近日容易发脾气, 使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。
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开头段落
3. 故事背景(我之所以写信,是因为…) I was informed by…that… I was kept up to date on… I learned in your micro-blog that… 4. 目的(我想申请/邀请/道歉/求助…) I’m writing this letter to…
高考应用文写作技巧(1)
五、好作文中必须出现的几个句式
1. 分词的使用 2. With结构 3. It句式 4. 倒装 5. 定语从句
1. 分词的使用
① 分词表时间先后: Hearing this, a few people began to run after him.(辽宁) ② 分词写景物:Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scenery, we headed for … ③ 分词写逻辑:Encouraged by the fact that …, we made every effort to do …
3. It句式
① It is + adj./n. + for sb. to do sth. It is vital for us to learn computer well, because it has changed our life so much. ② It is + 被强调部分 + that… It is through the Internet that we can learn more. ③ It做形式主语的主语从句 It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. (全国卷)
2. With结构
① 描写人物: He was carrying a bedroll and a large bag on his shoulder, with a large suitcase in his left hand. ② 描写景物: With the brilliant sunshine carpeting the way home, I rushed to the destination, energetic and excited. ③ 描写事件:A terrible accident happened yesterday, with nine people killed and almost eighty injured.
道歉信
I am writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.
书信体作文
建议信 申请信 感谢信 道歉信 邀请信 求助信 咨询信 告知信
邀请信 I am writing to invite you to join the....
I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. 求助信 I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
Dear Mr. Wang, _____________________________________________ _______________________________________
Yours sincerely Li Yue
Dear Mr. Wang, (故事背景+写信目的) Informed that our library is going to buy books, I am writing this letter to offer some suggestions.
提建议:
What we need most are popular science books. Owing
to…(Because…)
In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and
inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books:
Yours sincerely, Li Yue
2. 申请信 开头段:I am writing to apply for the job/position/ chance/opportunity.
中间段: I have the confidence that I can handle the job well. As for the reasons, for one thing, … for another, …
结尾段: Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know.
【2014浙江卷】 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越, 你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文 学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120 词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。 注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。
咨询信
I am writing to ask you for some relevant questions.
告知信
I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
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1. 建议信
开头段:I am writing these letters to offer you some suggestions.
中间段: Here are several suggestions for you. (1) You should/ought to do sth. (2) You are supposed to do sth. (3) Why not do sth.? (4) If I were you, I would do sth. (5) It is high time that you did sth.
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(3) 性格类: ① I’m also the vice monitor of my class, which has equipped me with a strong body and the ability of leadership. ② Being the team leader of our school basketball team, I get along well with my teammates, enjoy many outstanding awards and a harmonious interpersonal relationship in my team.
I am writing these letters to offer you 建议信 some suggestions.
I am writing to apply for the job/ 申请信 position/chance/opportunity.
感谢信
I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude/appreciation to you.
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4. 倒装 ① Only/Not only 位于句首 Only in this way can we… Only by this means can we… Only via this means can we… Merely via this means can we…