AbstractsAbstract 1加强A演化规律研究，特别是定量评价其与B之间的关系对A的勘探具有重要意义。
1. Enhancing studies of evolution laws of A, especially quantitatively evaluating the relationship between A and B have significant meanings for prospecting of A.存在问题：主语是单数还是复数注意动词名词化的使用“特别是”….especially/(Br.)specially/ particularly/ in particular/notably 都可以。
2. It is significant for exploring to strengthen on the research of the evolution rules o A, especially of the quantitative evaluation between A and B.3. The research on strengthening A evolution rule【直接跟名词】, especially on quantitatively evaluating A related with B is very significant for A exploration.采集鄂尔多斯盆地的A，通过物理模拟实验模拟A演化，利用C法获得相关数据，结合…结果，确定A演化规律及其与B的关系。
1.The evolution of A sampled from the Ordos Basin wasstudied[sampled 修饰不清] by physical simulation. Combining the relevant data obtained by Method C with the ……results, we confirmed the evolution laws of A and the relationship between A andB.2.Through collecting A from Ordos Basin, simulating the evolution rulesof A by physics simulation, applying Method C to obtain relevant data and combining the results of ……we can determine the evolution laws of A and the relationship with B. [方法论部分和结果部分混杂，句子比较长]3.First of all, collecting A in Ordos Basins; second, simulating Aevolution by physical simulation experiment; third obtaining correlation data by method C; fourth, combing…results to determine A evolution rule and relation with B. 【句子不完整】结果表明D先增加后减小，E随着模拟实验温度的增加呈现先减小后增大。
Problem translation 1.1. 【需要加The】Results show 【indicate也可以】that responding to the simulating temperature, D originally increase followed by decreasing, whereas E originally decrease followed by increasing.问题1“responding to…”词组的修饰关系；2.先…后…需要简单表达first and then2. The results indicate that D increase[单三] firstly 【与first区别】and then decrease[单三], and E shows an opposite tendency with the increase of experimental temperature【wrong expression】.3. It 【指代什么？】indicates that D changed from increase to decrease, E ranged from decrease from increase 【意义重复】with the increase of simulation【上下文中这个可省，但冠词不可省】experiment temperature.ＸＲＤ分析显示F控制G。
H的增加为I提供储集空间。
XRD analysis shows [demonstrates] that F [结果一般不用can] control 【现在时还是过去时？】G and increasing of H provide【与主语数的一致性】reservoir spaces for IAbstract 2对A的研究是当前B学科探索的热门。
【以下翻译都是直译、啰嗦】1.Currently, studying on A is the focus of the exploration of subject B.2.The study of A is a hot exploring area in subject B.3.The research on A is a hot topic in exploration of B subject.系统地分析A的结构和演化特征对深入认识C的分布规律具有重要的意义。
1.Systematic analysis of the structure and evolution characteristics of Ahave significant meaning for deep understanding the distribution of C.2.Systematic analysis of A’s structure and evolution rules is significantin deeply understanding C’s distribution laws.3.Systematically analyze structure and evolution character of A isimportant for deeply knowing C distribution. [错句]通过D的解释、E的分析以及F的分析[可以看出这是研究方法], 研究了A的结构、特征和演化历史,发现了明显的G特点。
1. According to interpretation of D, analysis of E and F, we studied the structure, characteristics and evolution history【不要同义重复】of A and discovered obvious G characteristics【重点容应该独立成句，因为前面是研究容，后面是结果发现】.2. Based on the interpretation of D and [the 不能省]analysis of E and F，A’s structure, and evolution rules have been studied and G characteristics is found.提出了H的概念, 并认为I和J是互相影响、互相叠加、互相干扰的。
这在一定程度上丰富了对B学科的认识。
1.In addition, we proposed the conception[与concept 的区别] of Htogether with 【冠词】viewpoint that IａｎｄＪareinteractional, inter-superposed and interferential【选词】, which enrich2.Proposing 【dangling modifier】the concept of D, I and J areinteracting, overlapping and interfere 【problem in parallelism】with each other which enriches the understanding of B to some degree. 【重要容要独立成句】3.其它问题摘抄1.下面这句存在的问题：parallelism, dangling modifier, use of article “the”By analyzing combinations of passage systems at different phases and relations between oil distribution and passage system, control factor of2. 【】Tectonic position plays an important controlling【避免同义重复】role to 【介词不当】the effective reservoir distribution.3. With the increase of grain-size, porosity and permeability is becoming significantly better. [主语与动词的数的一致性]AbstractsAbstract 1加强A演化规律研究，特别是定量评价其与B之间的关系对A的勘探具有重要意义。
1. Enhancing studies of evolution laws of A, especially quantitatively evaluating the relationship between A and B have significant meanings for prospecting of A.存在问题：主语是单数还是复数注意动词名词化的使用“特别是”….especially/(Br.)specially/ particularly/ in particular/notably 都可以。