Pre-writing
What should a best friend be like? A best friend should be…… can……
same
different
A: ………..should be the same, ………........... B: ………... isn’t necessary ………....... C: I don’t care …………..
While-writing
Who is your best friend? Introduce 3b your best friend by comparing you two .
My best friend Me
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While-writing
My Best Friend
Beginning 1.Who is your best friend? 2.Is your friend similar to you or Body part different? Describe your best friend. 3.What do you think a best friend Ending should be like?
3a
Wang Lingling Liu Lili tall tall library, and always She often goes to the school talks much hair about the things she reads. long straight short straight hair likes reading popular outgoing serious like sports Interests popular outgoing funny Personalities (more details)
tall Looks short straight hair like sports Interests popular outgoing Personalities funny smart
Both Wang Lingling and Liu Lili are tall with straight hair, but they look different. Wang Lingling has longer hair, while Liu Lili has shorter hair………………………………………… ..…………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………
My Best Friend
Objectives: At the end of the class, students are able to 1. compare two persons in different ways; write about Best Friend. 2. realize the value of friendship and cherish their friends.
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hard-working
smart
Friends are very important in our life! Everyone must have his own best friend. Wang Lingling’s best friend is Liu Lili. Beginning They are similar in some ways, but different in some other ways. Transition Both Wang Lingling and Liu Lili are tall with straight hair, but they look different. Wang Lingling has longer hair, while Liu Lili has shorter hair………………………………………… ..…………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………
Post-writing
-----Peer Assessment.
Marking Criteria评价标准
• • • • • Content to the point 内容切题(5’) Clear structure结构清晰(4’) Grammatical errors语法错误少(3’) Excellent Expressions亮点表达(2’) Clean handwriting书写整洁(1’)
Pre-writing
Wang Lingling
a Wang Lingling and Liu Lili are best friends. Look at the chart below and compare them.
Wang Lingling tall long straight hair likes reading popular outgoing serious hard-working Liu Lili