如何写好建议信
problems the son thinks about his father
His father doesn’t listen to him when he wants to do something or suggests an idea.
His father shouts at him when he tries to talk to him.
Dear _____, You asked me for my advice about____( 问题), and I will try to make some suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: Firstly, … Secondly, … Last, … I hope you will find my advice useful. Yours, Lucy
以下是一封如何和儿子相处的建议信的 范文
Dear Mr. Liu, I am very sorry to hear that. Here I want to give you some advice, I wish it could be helpful for you.
Firstly, you should be not only strict but also kind to him. Treat him as an adult. You mustn't always shout at him. Respect him and his advice. Maybe his advice is of value. Secondly, you may try to enjoy what he likes, such as music and DVDs. Take more notice of what he thinks. On one hand, you can understand him further, on the other hand you can narrow the gap between you. Thirdly, you can turn to your son's close friends for help. They can understand what your son thinks and needs better.
Body structure(常用主体模式):
Firstly, you should be not only …but also ....You mustn't always .... Maybe …. Secondly, you may try to …. On one hand, you can…, on the other hand you can …. Do not….
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help sb with sth:帮助某人某事 get along with sb:和某人相处 suggest :建议;暗示 go to for dinner:出去吃饭 make sb do:让某人做 spare time:空余时间 be alone: 独自一人的 be lonely:感到孤单的 selfish:自私的 distant:冷漠的 get annoyed:生气 forbid sb doing sth:禁止某人做某事 be hard on sb:对某人严格要求 have difficulty/trouble (in) doing sth:做某事有 麻烦或困难
I believe you can solve the problem satisfactorily, and everything will go well. Good luck to you!
假定你是李华,你的笔友Tom 给你发来电子邮件, 询问怎样才能哦与同学和睦相处。请你根据要点提示 给Tom 回一封电子邮件,提出你的建议。 要点提示: 1.尊重别人; 2.宽宏大量。 注意: 1.词数120左右; 2.不要逐条翻译,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:心胸开阔的 broad-minded
His parents always make him do things he doesn’t like.
They call him selfish and distant when he wants to be alone.
His father gets very angry when he plays foreign music. His father sends him to bed or tells him to study when he watches a DVD.
第二段:主体,即具体的建议内容,建议要具 体并有可操作性,不能空洞,以三至五条为佳, 每条建议三至五句话告诉对方如何实施或操作。
第三段:结尾,即对以上建议的总结。
Opening sentences(常用开头句):
1.I am very glad to hear from you. 2.Concerning your request, I would like to offer my advice on how to …. 3.You have asked me for my advice with regard to … and I will try to make some suggestions. 4.I am writing in reply to …
Yours sincerely/truly, Dr Fang
基本框架
1.开头:——开门见山,向对方陈述自己的观 点 2.主体:——对所提出的问题进行分析并说明 理由,接着提出自己的建议 3.结尾:——呼应开头,重申观点。
写作规范: 一般建议信可分三段来写: 第一段:开头,即确认对方的要求,并说明提 出与要求相符合的建议
No.1 high school in Qiyang
Writing a letter of advice
Lucy
如何写好建议信?(格式和书信基本一致)
1. To whom (收信人姓名 ,一般在左上角,顶格写)
2. From whom(写信人姓名,一般在右下角)
Dear _______________________ _______________________________________ _______________________________________
P37 Homework: Write a letter of advice to Liu Xiaowei.
• Dear Xiaowei • Many teenagers have difficulty getting along with their parents……
Thirdly, in my opinion, you would be wise to…. You can turn to …for help. Why not ….
Closing sentences(常用结尾句) 1.I hope you will find my suggestions/recommendations/advice helpful/practical/ useful. 2.At last, I hope I will be your best friend’s forever! Good luck to you! 3.Let’s keep in touch. I do hope to hear good news from you. 4.I do hope you will consider my suggestion.
Homework :
• 请你以祁阳一中高二学生的名义,用英语
就祁阳县的环境污染问题向县政府相关领 导写一封120字左右的建议信。
P37 Read and understand
What does the son think about his father?
Find out the key sentences
His father forbids him from meeting his friends at the Internet cafe.
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帮助某人某事 和某人相处 建议;暗示 出去吃饭 让某人做 空余时间 独自一人的 感到孤单的 自私的 冷漠的 生气 禁止某人做某事 对某人严格要求 做某事有麻烦或困难