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高考英语作文专题复习:高考图表作文写作指导-讲练结合
范例:
(上海春季)某城市近年每百人中手机用户增 长示意图。根据所给图表,简要描述某城市近 年每百人中手机用户增长情况,并试分析其增 长原因。
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0 1997年
1999年
2001年
2004年
As is described in the table/chart, more and more people have mobile phones in recent years.
Maybe they think it the most convenient way to get information and keep in touch with friends. As for studying, the numbers of boys and girls are equal, but altogether less than half of them would like to use the Internet as a tool to study.
小结:
A long sentence
1. trunk(主干部分): S.+V.+(O.)…
prepositional phrases(介短)
2. modifiers
clauses(从句) non-predicate verbs(非谓语)
修饰语部 分 3. parallel structures (并列结构) (A and/or B; A, B, and/or C)
I have recently made a survey among 50 boys and 50 girls in my school about the purposes of getting on the Internet.
As is shown in the chart, the girls’ favorite thing to do on-line is chatting while what the boys like to do most is playing games. Both boys and girls like to read news and send emails.
Living with his son, he works hard for a company which was founded in 2002 and most of his workmates show gre(并at列r结e构spparealcletl sftorucrtuhreism) .
Section Two:
Three steps to analyze a long sentence.
一划 (二括) “三会意”
(以近五年高考真题长句为例)
一划: 划主干(trunk), 给主谓宾.(S.V.O.)划___。
1. Charles Darwin, over 150 years ago, imagined a world that is far busier, nosier and more intimate(亲 密的) than the one we can see and hear.(2017年全 国二卷)
2. Bed that are too small, shower heads(淋浴喷 头) that are too low, and restaurant tables with hardly any leg-room(腿部空间)all make life difficult for those of above average height.
Learning contents: 1. The formation of a long sentence. 2. Three steps to analyze a long sentence. 3. Exercises on long sentences.
Section One: How is a long sentence formed?
3、图表写作套句精选 1).The table shows the changes in the number of……over the period from…… to……
2).The graph provides some interesting data regarding……
3).This is a graph which describes the trend of……
It is clear / evident from the figures/statistics that ……
图表中的数据(Data)具体表达法:
在一系列的时间段中转变: change over time学科网 zxxk
持续变化的data在不同情况下: 增加:increase / rise / go up …… 减少:decrease / drop / fall …… 稳定:remain stable / steady
The reasons for the rise in the number of people with mobile phones are as follows. Firstly, the technology of making mobile phones is changing rapidly, which leads to the drop in the prices. Secondly, people’s income has been increasing . As a consequence, they have more choices. Thirdly, mobile phones make people’s communication easy and convenient .
图表作文
图表作文分类:
柱状图
Bar Chart
Pie Chart 饼状图
Item
1994
Food
65%
Clothing 8%
Recreation 3%
1995
60% 9% 5%
1996
48% 12% 7%
1997
42% 15% 8%
1998
35% 17% 10%
Others Total
24% 26% 33% 35% 38% 100% 100% 100% 100% 100%
He works hard.
(介词短语prepositional phrases)
He works hard for a company.
He works hard for a company which was founded in 2002. (从句clauses)
Living with his sonch was founded i(n非谓2语00no2n-.predicate verbs)
Homework
假设你是张亮,上周你们班以“谁是你的偶像”为题,
在2600名学生中进行了一次调查。以下是调查数据:
偶像(idol)
女生
男生
伟人
18%
18%
父母
25%
11%
影视明星
50%
14%
体育明星
6%
48%
没有偶像
1%
9%
1.调查时间、问题以及调查对象
2.男女生在选择偶像方面的差异以及产生以上现象的原 因
As far as I’m concerned, the case of our school is probably a tip of the iceberg. The Internet has bought about great effects on our lives. We should try to make the Internet our good and faithful assistant.
Table
矩形的竖行和横行进行排列的表格
Graph
表示两组数的关系-通常为函数关系图
Persistence produces miracles!
坚持铸就奇迹!
图表作文的写作框架:
图表式作文是说明文的一种。一般可分 三个层次来写:
第一:按照题目要求描述图表反映的 总情况,即概括大意。
第二:分析数字的变化,归纳并找出 产生变化的原因。
It can be estimated that the population of the mobile phone holders will reach a new height with the further advance of science and technology.
Practice
二括: 给修饰语(modifiers)介短, 非谓和从句加( )。
1. Two of the author(s of the revie) w made a study (published in 201)4( which showed a five to 10
4).The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that……
5).The graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in……
6)……(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in……
假如你叫Jim Lee,你最近对你们学校100 名同学(男女各半)进行了上网目的的调
查。现将调查结果(如下表所示)用英语 给某报社的编辑写一封信,报告此事。
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