吸引眼球的高级词汇与复杂句式及演讲/致辞写作运用探究写作时，如果仅局限在把内容交代清楚这一层次，只选用一些普通的词，或一律使用简单句平铺直叙，那么习作就会显得呆板、单调，没有可读性。

要想写出高分作文，不仅要把要求表述清楚，而且还要尝试使用高级词汇与复杂句式。

如能运用恰当，哪怕只用上一、两处，也会为习作增添色彩，给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象。

一、运用高级词汇三原则1．标新立异恰当地使用一些蕴含感情色彩或其他考生不容易想到的高级词汇，会彰显自己的水平。

[高考佳句]①I’ll thank you if you think about my suggestion.→I’ll appreciate it if you take my suggestion into consi－deration.(福建高考满分作文)②I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is important for me，so I didn’t reply to you without delay.→I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is vital for me，so I didn’t reply to you without delay.(山东高考满分作文)③As a result the plan was a failure.→The plan turned out to be a failure.(辽宁高考标准范文)④We’ll try our best to improve the working conditions.→We’ll spare no effort to promote the working conditions.(山东高考标准范文)2．短语优先写作中，要想写出“亮点”就要注意挖掘自己现存的词汇潜力，多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，会使短文内容丰富，表达更有力度，增添文采。

[高考佳句]①To achieve one’s dream，one must try to equip oneself with rich knowledge and seta goal easy to reach.→To achieve one’s dream，one must make great efforts to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach.(北京高考满分作文)②What’s more，we can pour out the troubles we face，and release our pressure from different aspects.→What’s more，we can pour out the troubles we are faced with，and release our pressure from different aspects.(重庆高考满分作文)③To tell you the truth，I don’t really like your new novel.→To tell you the truth，I really show no interest in your new novel.(湖南高考满分作文)3．手法多样在表达相同或相近的意思时，要尽量避免过多地使用同一个单词，用其他相应的词或短语来代替，这样能让阅卷老师感觉到你词汇量丰富。

实在找不到，可以变更说法，“曲径通幽”或许会有更好的效果。

[高考佳句]①I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.→I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.(江西高考满分作文)②It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite different from the way of education of China.→It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite different from that of China.(湖北高考满分作文)【即时演练】用较高级词汇代替黑体的单词或短语1．We all have the same opportunity.2．More and more visitors have been attracted to this place.3．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses. 4．We’ll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.5．I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.6．Would you please help me to turn down the radio?『答案』 1.possess 2.An increasing number of 3.challenging 4.promote 5.put up with 6.do me a favor二、运用高级句式的七大策略1．运用被动语态，重点更鲜明[高考佳句]①We will have selected about thirty volunteers to the Mars throughout the world by 2015.→About thirty volunteers will have been selected to the Mars throughout the world by 2015.(广东高考书面表达)②I’m delighted to know that the Shanghai Museum will organize a famous art exhibition and you are collecting opinions of the public as to selecting the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.→I’m delighted to know that a famous art exhibition will be organized by the Shanghai Museum and opinions of the public are being collected as to selecting the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.(上海高考满分作文)2．运用强调句，重点更突出[高考佳句]①His great efforts helped me out of the trouble.→It was his great efforts that helped me out of the trouble.(安徽高考满分作文)②Without hesitation，I decided to follow them and we had lots of fun that day.→Without hesitation，I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day.(2015·浙江，标准范文)③Our parents have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.→It’s our parents who have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.(重庆高考满分作文)3．运用倒装句，语言更活泼[高考佳句]①Books are not only shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.→Not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.(2015·重庆，标准范文)②I was so excited that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.→So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand a t riding it.(2014·福建，满分作文)③The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in this way.→Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy.(福建高考满分作文)4．运用省略句，行文更简洁[高考佳句]①Maybe it is a better idea to take outdoor activities when you feel bad.→Maybe it is a better idea to take outdoor activities when feeling bad.(2014·安徽，满分作文)②Are you looking forward to the prize－giving ceremony? Sure! It’ll be held from 15：00 to 17：00.→Looking forward to the prize－giving ceremony?Sure! It’ll be held from 15：00 to 17：00.(2014·辽宁，满分作文)③As it is scheduled，English Talent Show will be held today.→As scheduled，English Talent Show will be held today.(2014·陕西，满分作文)④Although they were faced with many problems，they didn’t lose heart.→Although faced with many problems，they didn’t lose heart.(山东高考满分作文) 5．运用感叹句，感情更强烈[高考佳句]①From the expression on the face，I knew my math teacher was surprised.→What a surprised expression was on my math teacher’s face！(2015·湖南，满分作文)②It is a very splendid moment.→How splendid a moment it is！(辽宁高考满分作文)6．运用with复合结构、分词(短语)等，结构更简明[高考佳句]①Our school lies at the foot of a mountain，there is a river flowing in front of it.→At the foot of a mountain lies our school，with a river flowing in front of it.(北京高考满分作文)②The teacher came into the lecture hall，many students followed him.→The teacher came into the lecture hall，followed by many students.(广东高考满分作文)③I picked up the case.I shouted at the man loudly.But he didn’t hear me and rode away.→After picking up the case，I shouted at the man loudly，but he rode too fast to hear me.(湖南高考满分作文)7．运用虚拟语气，表达更传神[高考佳句]①I missed being hit by the car with your help.→Without your help，I would have been hit by the car.(安徽高考满分作文)②It is high time for both local government and residents to take effective measures.→It is high time that both local government and residents took effective measures.(福建高考满分作文)8．运用复合句，句式更多变[高考佳句]①To our surprise，the little girl knows so many things.→What surprised us most is that the little girl knows so many things.(重庆高考满分作文)②It was quite an experience for both of us，and I will never forget it for the rest of my life.→It was quite an experience for both of us，which I’ll never forget for the rest of my life.(陕西高考满分作文)9．运用it句式，表达更丰富[高考佳句]①Personally，drinking plenty of boiled water every day is necessary.→I think it necessary that we should drink plenty of boiled water every day.(陕西高考满分作文)我认为我们每天喝大量的开水是必要的。