• As is vividly described in the drawing above, 画 图内容. The drawing does reflect a common social phenomenon and is really thoughtprovoking.(令人深思) • The implied meaning of the drawing should be taken into account seriously. To begin with, 揭示 含义1. What's more, 揭示含义2. The current social phenomenon should arouse the great concern of our whole society. • In my view, 措施1. In order to eliminate the current evil phenomenon revealed in the drawing, relevant laws and regulations must be established to 措施2. Only in this way can。
1、在图片里，我们看到父母和奶奶帮助一位女孩在 学骑自行车。 2、更荒谬的是，妈妈还随身带着一个药箱。 3 、这样的话，这个女孩无法独立学会骑自行车了。 4、它告诉我们的父母不应该给他们的孩子太多帮助。 5、他们应该让他们的孩子学会自立。 6、许多父母认为他们必须为孩子准备好一切，使他们 的孩子能专心学习。 7、将来没有父母的帮助，孩子们不可能独立过他们自 己的生活。 8、作为父母亲应该关爱孩子的成长,但绝不是太多。 9、这样会宠坏孩子。 10、将来她会一事无成。
高考作文训练:看图作文写作技巧
写作步骤: 1. 用中文描述图片 ---体裁、人称、时态、 2. 用中文列出要点 ---3. 用英语转述句子 ---4. 用英语组织篇章 ----
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十句作文法 句子骨干 合适的连接词
2002年上海高考作文 简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈 谈自己的感想。
• 议论文 议论文多为一幅图,有时也有两幅。这 类作文的时态通常用一般现在时,可以分为 三段写,一般第一段先描述看图内容,可以用 上这些句子开头: • in the picture above we can see...; • here is a picture about...; • as we can see in the picture...; • from the picture, we can see that...; • 或者it can be seen/concluded from the picture that...等等。
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2002年上海高考作文 简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己 的感想。 In the picture, we can see that the girl’s parents and her grandmother are helping the girl, which makes it impossible for the girl to ride a bicycle on her own. What is more, it is ridiculous that her mother even takes some medicine with her. In fact, this is not a picture just for fun. It tells us that parents shouldn’t help their children too much. They should let their children learn to be more independent. Many parents share the opinion that they must get everything ready for their children so that their children can put more emphasis on their studies. They all fail to consider that with the help of this kind, children won’t be able to live their own life without their parents in the future. Nowadays, it is often reported that a certain college student doesn’t know how to wash her socks. How can she compete with others after graduation? Love and attention is needed in the growth of a child, but it should never be too much or you will spoil the child and he will accomplish nothing in his life.
【写作指导】
1. 要审清写作要求。
2. 此题只提供了一幅相关的图画信息。通过观察及写作要求，我 们可以确定： a. 体裁：夹叙夹议 般现在时。 b. 人称：须用第三人称 c. 时态：可用一
3. 审清图画的主题和梗概：
一个女孩在学骑自行车，她的爸爸、妈妈、奶奶一起帮助她， 女孩喊着，“你们让我自己骑好吗？”由此，发表评论：让孩子 学 会自立。 4. 增加细节，连贯成文，做到层次分明，结构严谨，并准确选用