Ending : take action , a more beautiful place
英语书面表达写作技巧
Step3
整
将列出的核心词汇或短语整理成句子,使结构完整，符
合表达习惯。
The man is throwing away the rubbish everywhere
The woman is stopping him.
（2018河北 ） 请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短 文。
提示 （1）What are the man and the woman doing? （2）What should you do when you see people litter like this? Why?
要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 （2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名 （3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
the woman does.
He doesn’t listen to me, I will pick it up myself and put in in the
dustbin.
I think the city is my home.
we should protect the environment.
sentences into a passage
, 1.表示并列或递进: and, both…and; not only…but also,
neither…nor; 2.表示条件: if
3.表示顺序: first , next，then, finally; 4.表示因果: because, so; 5.表示选择: or, either…or; 6.表示解释: for example, such as; 7.表示转折: but, however
初中英语书面表达 写作技巧指导
To be able to write an English compositon
The ways of composition writing. Use the ways to write a composition.
Discuss about this picture
英语书面表达写作技巧
写作第五步：查 检查人称、时态、单词拼写和大小写使用正确
写作第六步： 美 修改词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下改变 句式或添加语句，展示自己的语言功底。
Everyone takes action to protect it, the city will be a more
beautiful place to live.
英语书面表达写作技巧
Step 4：
连
恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分
衔接自然。
Use connectives to join sentences . Turn the
参考词汇：throw, environment, civilized（文明的） I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is_______________
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英语书面表达写作技巧
Step1
审
Read the tips carefully to think about the topic ,
including the background.
认真审题，分析背景,找出文章要表达的中心。
一般将来时
英语书面表达写作技巧
列 Step2
What are you asked to write about? How many aspects (方面)？List the key words and expressions
• 用核心词汇或短语列出文章要点。
The man: throw away ,everywhere The woman: stop, ask…to …, put…in… I: when,doesn’t listen to, pick up, myself, protect the environment
For example, in this passage:
定主题：环__保_、__爱_护__环__境___
定人称、定时态：介绍图示中两个人在做的事情，
人称为_第__三__人__称，时态为_现__在__进__行__时__；介绍自己看到此 类情况的做法，人称为_第__一__人_称_，时态为_一__般__现__在__时/
She asks him to put the rubbish in the n that the city is our home.
I see other people throw away rubbish everywhere, I will also do as