“批改网”句子修改案例
学生在批改网上提交作文后可多次修改作文。
根据系统给出的按句点评,学生可以清晰快速地知道自己的作文有哪些语法错误,通过多次修改完善,从而不断提高作文的分数和学生的英语写作能力。
下面就是两个学生不断修改句子而提高分数的案例:
句子修改实例一:宫同学 海淀 No.0016中学 初一 《我的新年愿望》
term, beasuse my dream is go to do a university professor.
2015-02-15 09:44:37
my dream is go to do a university professor. 2015-02-15 09:45:10 term, because my dream is university professor. 2015-02-15 09:45:51
句子修改实例二:郑同学 朝阳 No: 0019中学 初三 《我的春节》
because I think the dumplings I like it .
2015-02-27 20:51:25 because I think the Jiaozi I like it.
2015-02-24 10:21:54 because I think the dumplings delicious, I like it.
2015-02-24 10:25:51
because I think the dumplings delicious, I like it. 2015-02-24 10:37:08 because I think the dumplings delicious, I like it.
2015-02-24 10:33:37。