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In contemporary society, much ink has been spilled about......(题目改写),and some claim that... Such assertion, however, is torn to pieces by others. As far as I am concerned, the statement that...(题目改写)is arbitrary and one-sided because it fails to take all the related circumstances into consideration. We should analyze this statement comprehensively before we draw the eventual conclusion.结尾段In brief, based on the previous discussion, the issue...(改写题目)is complex and needs a case by case analysis. We are not supposed to disregard those situations where the statement is unjustifiable. As a result, I cannot totally agree with this statement.Tips: 不要在意字数问题,不要害怕写多了或写少了,重点是写全了。

写全的意思就是,evidence你给我好好听,它举到的例子,具体到什么物品,你都给我写出来,有多详细就多详细,那个物品的名字你拼不来你就用按那个发音去猜,你的目的就是告诉考官,我听到了!只是不知道怎么写而已。

你当时听力记下来的东西都是有用的,全给我写上去!reading你可以不用写那么详细,用自己的语言总结一下,点到就好,但是你得点全了。

而listening你越详细越好!最后,每每写完一个supporting idea的段落后,段落的最后你最好写上:所以听力说阅读是错的大致就是这个意思,这句话你得写,这体现了听力和阅读的关系。

这句话不写你可能就从30变成了29。

模板:段一:The reading passage states that ... , wh ereas the listening believes that…段二:To begin with, the reading insists that ... The speaker, however, argues that…段三:Furthermore, the author of the reading claims... In contrast, the professor suggests that…段四:Finally, the writer displays that... On th e contrary, the lecturer indicates that…这就是我用的无比简洁版模板,你喜欢花哨的话,上网自己搜吧。

其实严格意义上不算模板,更像是提供给一个写作框架。

其实到后面我基本已经形成了一个写作思路,这个思路就是让步转折,结构就是这样的:第一段+让步段+两个转折段+结尾,基本就是A比B好,B有一个好处,可是A有两个好处,A的好处点更多,或是A的好处更重大,所以A好,然后总结一下。

让步段1.不应该做A,因为会影响B2.如果坚持做A而不顾B的话,后果会很严重3.具体说明严重的后果是什么4.得出结论,应该做B/不应该做A转折段1.做A的好处2. 背景铺垫具体行为故事结局分析故事——点题举例论证--故事背景介绍(人物|时间|地点|面对问题)具体行为.注意对比最终结果离开他们的前任(表示对比的表达),中国新一代农民工表现出更大的偏好在制造业而不是在建筑业工作。

2013年全国农民工监测调查(调查的名称),国家统计局发布的(发布机构国家统计局)周一(调查时间),总共有2.69亿农民工报道中国在2013年底,同比增长2.4%。

这些工人,46.6%出生在1980年后(调查结果)大约39%的年轻员工受聘于制造业,而只有26.5%的老年工人在这个行业工作。

另一方面,只有14.5%的年轻一代网在建筑业,不到一半的数量高级工人。

(结果的对比)话题:社会类分析:隐藏绝对词类的题目暗含的意思是一类人都应该做某事儿。

我们既可以完全同意这个事儿的2-3个好处,也可以完全不同意找到其2-3个比较好展开而且不重复的坏处,毕竟一个事儿很难适合所有人,只要我们找到一个反例,实际上就可以很好地反驳这个题目。

思路一:一边倒同意1.由于很多大城市的生活成本高到了前所未有程度,现在的年轻人普遍面临着双重压力,因此没有时间和精力来帮忙社区First and foremost, with the living costs in most of megalopolises hitting all time high, a large proportion of young urban residents today are exposed to scissor-style pressure, as a result of which rare will be the spare time that is available for making contributions to improving the community. For relevant examples we only need to turn to the experience of my elder brother, a newly graduated college student, majoring in software engineering, working in a leading software company as a development engineer.越来越大的压力:mounting pressure pressure|stress|strain大城市:megalopolises|megacity|big city|metropolisesA majority of youths today|A multitude teenagers at present are exposed to ascissor-style pressure: from above, through their parents with ever-higher expectations, and from below, from their peers most of whom try their best to outdo each other.2.随着社交网络的出现以及生活节奏的加快,现在的年轻人跟邻居熟识的机会越来越少,自然也就不愿意去参与社区的改善。

On the top of that, there is no point for the young people working in metropolises to help their neighbors if the chance of getting acquainted with them seems quit slim, thanks mainly to the advent of social network applications and also to the increasingly rapid pace of modern life. My elder brother's experience can be cited here again to shed the light on this point.Money is the most important aspect in a job.Material reward is not the only factor to consider while choosing a job, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those seasoned employees, thanks to the ever-increasing living cost in the overwhelming majority of metropolises, to the scissor-style pressure they are exposed to from supporting their aging parents as well as raising children, and above all, to their strong desire of receiving salaries in a reasonable proportion to their years of strenuous work.Helping the community| Voluntary work is not the only factor to consider in their spare time, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those young people from affluent families, thanks mainly to the strong desire to escape the ennui of home and to find identity, and also to the sense of self-fulfillment gained in such kind of activities.思路二:具体情况具体分析对于条件比较差的年轻人来说,他们很难找到足够的时间来帮助改善社区因为他们没有选择只能不遗余力的赚更多的钱,甚至以牺牲自己的身体健康为代价With regard to young people in poor and backward areas, hardly could they have enough time to make contributions to the improvement of their communities on account of the fact that they have no options but to pull out all their stops to earn more money even at the cost their health. There are myriads of examples in our lives, one of which is my elder brother, a high school graduate, working as a waiter in a restaurant in Beijing.然而,对于那些来自经济比较发达地区的年轻人来说,很容易想象他们中绝大部分人愿意在社区改善中扮演非常积极的角色。

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