般) On his arriving/ arrival, please give….
(高级)
If the weather permits, I’ll come tomorrow. (一
般) Weather permitting, I’ll come tomorrow. (高级)
Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般)
The subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English…. (高级精)品课件
9. 使用虚拟语气
The ship didn’t sink because there were the efforts of the captain. (一 B般ut)for the efforts of the captain, the ship would
词汇和语法的数量和准确性；
有用效了地语使句上语言下文的的得连体贯性；
间的连接 成分
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语言地道， 规范
3、拼写和标点是语言 准确性的一个方面， 评分时，应视其对交 际的影响程度予以考 虑。
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4、词数少于100和多于 140的，从总分中减去2 分。
5、如书写较差，以至影 响交际，将分数降低一 个档次。
8. 使用定语从句
The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般)
The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of. (高级)
I studied Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer at school. (一般)
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
4.The students there needn’t pay for their books. Books are free for the students there.
7. She went to Austria in order to study music. She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.
8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.
9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. Our school is made up of twenty–six classrooms.
10.You can find my house easily. You’ll have no trouble fin精d品i课n件g m定语从句 In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place
where we can find much useful information.
Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
3、 倒装句 Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man. 4、 省略句 They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary. 5、 with短语 I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.
5. As a result the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure.
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6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.
Followed by many students, she… . (高级) Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten . (一般)
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5. 使用v-ing形式
When he arrives please give me an e-mail. (一
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7. 使用状语从句
I won’t believe what he says. (一般)
No matter what he says, I won’t believe. (高级)
If you come back before six o’clock, you can go out. (一般)
1. 使用较高级的词汇
词汇反映你知识贮存量的 多少，也是衡量英语水平 的一个重要标志。
技
2. 使用较丰富的句式
运用得当的句子结构可以 给文章增色不少，从而使 整篇文章因此而生辉 。
巧
使用恰当连接词，对写一
3. 使用恰当的连接词
篇有“英语味”的文章很 重要，能使文章上下衔接
自然、紧凑。
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一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
have sunk. (高级)
I wasn’t invited to the party, so I didn’t attend it. (一般)
If I had been invited to the party, I would have attended it. (高级)
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10. 使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句
Now our School has three teachers, teaching 48 pupils. (高级)
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6. 使用名词性从句
It disappointed everybody that he didn’t turn up. (一般) The fact that he didn’t turn up disappointed everybody. (高级)
7、 各种名词性从句 That’s what I should do. We should do a favor to whoever needs help
at present.
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8、 各种状语从句
Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, we’ll catch up sooner or later. Do call me before hand so that I can meet you at the airport. They had to wait because the rain was getting more and more heavily.
书面表达
之 赢取高分策略
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NMET书面表达评分原则
1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定 档次。
第五档： 20~25分 第四档： 15~20分 第三档： 10~15分 第二档： 5 ~ 10分 第一档： 0 ~ 5分
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覆盖所有内容 要点
应用了较多的 语法结构和词
2、主要内容：
汇
内容要点；
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.
2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him .
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Practice
1. 改变时态 The bell is ringing now. (一般) There goes the bell. (高级)
2. 改变语态 People suggest that the conference be put
off. (一般) It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级
We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well. (一般)
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Which composition feels more attractive, why?
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书面表达如何写？
文字信息 1、审题 图画信息
题材、人称、时态、要点
五
2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句
话的细节要点。
个
3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点
的词语扩展成句子。