雅思强化写作精讲班第4讲讲义有效避免7种语法错误有效避免7种语法错误1 Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employer.2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.2.3The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve.2.4 Many students are very like studying home economics.2.5 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar.3 Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalisation may create.4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.5 Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.6 Some people think the Internet only has positive impact, other people think it also has negative influence on our lives.7 There are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment.高分范文讲解范文讲解In Britain, when some people get old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. The government has to pay for his care. Who should be responsible for our old people? Give reasons for your answer.Example 2 Band 8One of the most challenging problems of today’s society is the question about who should be responsible for our old people. It is not only a problem with money but also a question of the system we want our society to have. In my essay, I would like to present four possible models.Firstly, the company could be responsible for its retired employees. To do this, a special fund could be established. The advantage of this model is that if one believes in the capitalist system, it should be the cheapest solution. One possible problem is that the companies may have competition disadvantage due to higher staff costs.A second solution is that the government has to take the responsibility for the old people’s care. It can finance this with its tax in comes. Actually, this is the most democratic model since everybody gets as much money as he or she needs. Unfortunately, as the present situation in our country shows, this solution seems not to work very well.The government can no longer afford to support all the old peoples.Another way of solving the problem is to give back the responsibility to the individual, which means that everybody has to save money during their working life for the live after their retirement. This seems to be not a very fair model because there will certainly be people who can’t afford to save part of their salary; therefore, the government would have to care for them.A last solution is to go back to the old model of the “big family who cares for all their members. I do not think this is possible in our days society because the family structures have changed.To sum up, I have to admit that I cannot find a really good solution for this problem. All models have both advantages and disadvantages. Certainly we have to think about this topic much more in the future.雅思考官9分范文Writing Task 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced?It is true that in almost every country today each family produces a large amount of waste every week. Most of the rubbish comes from the packaging of the things we buy, such as processed food. However, even if we buy food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags that are used everywhere.The first reason why we have so much packaging is that we consume so much more every day than families did in the past. Also, convenience is very important in modern life; therefore, we buy packaged food that can be transported over long distances and store it until we need it, at first in the supermarket, then at home.Further, the amount of waste produced is also a result of our habit of using something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used valuable resources and energy. Above all, we also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to deal with.Therefore, I think that governments need to raise this awareness in the general public. Children should be educated about environmental issues at school while adults need to take action. Governments can encourage such action by collecting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags and fining families and shops that do not try to recycle their waste.。