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雅思基础写作第一讲-适用于开篇课堂
SECTION 3
Assessment Criteria
IELTS 写作新评分标准:
GRA: Grammatical Range and Accuracy (语法范围与精确性)
语言能力
LR:Lexical Resource (词汇资源) CC: Coherence & Cohesion (内容连贯与篇章衔接)
思维能力
TA: Task Achievement(任务完成)--1 TR: Task Response(任务回应)--2
雅思写作 课程设计
组建文章 (话题,思路)
排列 组合
段
强化阶段 句法 词法
连词成句 连句成篇
基础阶段
影响写作成绩的四个错误
错误一:语言绝对化 人们在使用语言描述事物变化时,应尽可能 避免语言过于绝对化,尤其是在使用第二语 言进行正式的书面表述时,更应该注意该语 言中非绝对化表达方式的学习,这样才能尽 显文章内容的客观性,这是绝大多数中国考 生在面对雅思写作时所忽视的 。
错误四:文章没有分段或分段不充分 雅思作文应按照论文的写作格式分段,即有 开头段,结尾段和由两到三段构成的主体段 落。不论是四段式还是五段式,考生只要进 行合理的分段,就能满足考试在逻辑性方面 的要求。
雅思议论文写作谨记六方面
可能超过很多考生的 想象,而且,如果考生在第一段还使用大量恶俗 的模板,还在第一句说with the development of society,那他会发现他的成绩单上的作文得分会 在4分左右。其实,翻翻雅思考官的范文,我们会 发现,考官在第一段只干了两件事情:引出背景+ 表明观点,甚至很多考官只干了第一件事情(引出 背景),仅此而已。但是,考官的首段会很具体, 会和文章特定场合挂钩。(请参照剑5的165页,以 及剑7的163页)
Task 1
雅思大作文的五大类型
第一大类:问题解决类 题目中的问题提及 “原因”“解决方 案”
The resources on the earth are above a dangerous level. What the causes of this problem? How to solve this problem? The gap between the rich and the poor is widening, as the rich becomes richer and the poor becomes poorer. What are the causes of this and can you suggest some solutions. More and more children are putting on more weight than ever before. What are the causes of this and any suggestions.
No.3 作文还要加标题 英语考试有一个国际惯例(common practice):写作文时不需要加标题,直接写 正文就行。加标题属于浪费感情,浪费表情。 而且,这个标题可能太大,一篇250字的文 章不能承担标题之重;这个标题可能太小, 只照顾到你这篇文章的一小部分;这个标题 可能加错了,意思与文章相反,反而会误导 考官。总之,不需要加任何标题。
SECTION 2
IELTS WRITING
An Overview of IELTS Writing
Task 1
Time:20 min
Words: 150
Time: 40 min
Task 2
Words: 250
以考查图表为主。考的较多的图 表有曲线图、柱状图、饼状图、 表格等。也有可能考到两种不同 种类的图表。另外,流程图和示 意图偶尔也会考到 。
考生答卷
On the one hand, living in big cities brings about a considerable number of advantages, which is also why people move to big cities. Initially, it is undeniable that work conditions in big cities are usually better that those in countries and small cities. With more work opportunities and a higher level of salary, people in other places, especially the young, are inclined to move to big cities. Subsequently, not only does living in big cities offer people better work conditions, but also it affords dwellers with facilities of higher quality. These facilities, such as the premium hospitals and education resources, are extremely attractive to countryside people and those in small cities.
What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this issue?
第五类:综合类
题目中出现之前提到的两种文章组合
To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? what measures do you think can protect them? 说明+解决方案 An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry. Why do you think it is the case? And do you think it is positive?" 说明文+议论文 Women now can do some work which traditionally be done by men. Why do you think this changes happened? What is your opinion about this change? 说明文+议论文
为解决该问题,一些表达委婉语气的用语和 句式,考生可以尝试使用,如:may, might, would, could, largely, possibly, probably, be likely (unlikely) to, be inclined to, tend to, to a large (some) extent, there is a higher probability/possibility that…等。
对比如下两组句子 :
This tends to occur whenever there is a downturn in commodity prices. This occurs whenever there is a downturn in commodity prices.
A child learning a foreign language at primary school causes confusion between their native language and the foreign one. A child learning a foreign language at primary school is likely to cause confusion between their native language and the foreign one.
第二类,第三类 议论文-同意不同意,观点比较 题目问题中出现立场性的问题 What's your opinion? Do you agree or disagree? To what extend do you agree or disagree? Do you think this is positive? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
错误三:容易跑题 该现象产生的原因主要是考生没有正确地理 解题目,如Some people think that foreign tourists abroad should be charged more than local people to visit a country’s cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2011年4 月30日A类)
就该题而言,很多考生将意思是“收费”的 charged一词理解为“控制”,而该词是我 们在中学阶段就已经学习过的。这就很容易 导致作文跑题,而跑题的作文分数为5分。 避免该问题,首先,在积累词汇阶段,考生 应连同其同义词准确记忆;其次,由于每年 的考题重复率相对较高,所以,如果时间允 许,考生可以在练习阶段把近几年题目通读 一遍,准确理解题目内容。
International English Language Testing System
雅思基础写作 第一讲
SECTION 1
• An Overview of IELTS
Listening
Reading
30 min 60 min 60 min 10-15 min