Extension
• --- Two years ago, when my girlfriend left me, i began to like small pet dogs especially when I was alone, because they could give me a warm feeling that someone will always be there for me, never hurt me ,care for me and stay with me for all my life .
1942
双宾语问题
• She is making Tom a new coat．→
• Tom is being made a new coat． • A new coat is being made for Tom．
英语表达的特别注意
• 1. 英语汉语的逻辑区别 • 英语的“although…but” 结构和汉语的“虽然但
是”结构。 • 逻辑性：英语逻辑和汉语逻辑的不同------中间环
节的省略 • 虽然我是个女孩子，但是我有远大的理想 • Although I am a girl , I have ambitious dreams. • I am a girl , but I have ambitious dreams. • 虽然我是个女孩子，但是我爱体育 • 虽然我是个女孩子，但是我想当别人的丈夫
house. 5 The news agent delivers our papers every
morning. 6 The postman delivered a letter this morning. 7 Prisoners of war built this bridge in 1942.
大作文写作练习方法
• 基本功练习： • 1 paraphrasing 多种表达方式：句子与用词
的练习 A对B很重要 （不是直译而是意思的表达） 练习要点：练习时不要拘泥与字面意思（形 合），要更加注重意合 练习：A对B不重要
练习答案
• A is not important to b • A is of trivial importance to B • A means nothing to B • A plays an (a) Inconsequential /
because they can give me a warm feeling • ---i like small pet dogs especially when I am alone,
because they can give me a warm feeling that someone is there for me
outside my house • our papers are delivered by the news agent
every morning • a letter was delivered by the postman this
morning • this bridge was built by the prisoners of war in
被动
• the thief was arrested by the police • a present was given to me by him • the boy has been punished by the headmaster • a new road is being built by the workmen
insignificant / piddling /unconsidered / unimportant / trivial / trifling part in B • B will not be affected without A • The importance of A to B could certainly be ignored / denied.
• 练习：education is important
基本功练习方法
• 3 .句式变化：内容不变的前提下，结构的 变化
• 主语的变化，主被动变化，长短句变化。
主动
1 The police arrested the thief. 2 He gave me a present. 3 The headmaster has punished the boy. 4 Workmen are building a new road outside important difference-----creativity 小作文：排斥任何形式的创造→分析、归纳、
对比、综合能力→对于语法的宽松态度→ 用词、句型的固定与可预测性 大作文：创造与表达→用词、句型的灵活性 →对于语法的严格态度→注意逻辑、文章 结构、防止跑题
基本功练习方法
• 2. 扩充句子：extension • 用不同的语法结构来扩充，如同位语，定语，状语，插入
语，从句等等，不要重复同一语法结构 • i like dogs • ---i like small pet dogs • ---i like small pet dogs especially when I am alone • --- i like small pet dogs especially when I am alone,
大作文准备
• Time distribution • How to prepare:
1 knowledge background and vocabulary （ten principles）
2 the fundamentals: grammar ，sentence pattern and memorization of sample essays（4、5、6）
高分因素
• 5分：是否过250字，是否切题与重大表达 语法错误
• 6分：句型复杂程度，错误数量
• 7分：词汇的复杂和精细程度，句型的多样 程度。
注意
• 以上后面的要求同时包含前面的要求，也 就是说，如果你的字数不到250，即使句型 不错，一般很难得到7分，除非写出了9分 的句型和词汇，A类同学不要吝啬字数。