专题限时集训(四) 概要写作训练2A阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Peter loved to shop used articles.Almost a month ago,he bought a popular word game that used little pieces of wood with different letters on them.As he was purchasing it,the salesgirl said,“Oh,look,the game box hasn't even been opened yet.That might be worth some money.”Peter examined the box and,sure enough,it was completely covered in factory sealed plastic.And he saw a date of 1973 on the back of the box.“You should put that up for auction(拍卖) on the Internet,and see what happens,”the salesgirl said.“Yes,you're right.People like something rare,”Peter agreed.“I can't imagine there being very many unopened boxes of this game still around 40 years later.”“Don't forget to tell me if you sell it,” the salesgirl smiled.“No problem,” Peter said.After he got home,Peter went online to several auction websites looking for his game.But he couldn't find it.Then he typed in the name of the word game and hit search.The search result was 543 websites containing information about the changes of the game.Over the years,the game had been produced using letters in different sizes and game boards in different colors.He also found some lists of game fans looking for various versions of the game.Peter emailed some of them,telling them what he had.Two weeks later,Peter went back to the shop.“Hello.Do you still remember the unopened word game?”The salesgirl looked at him for a second,then recognized him and said,“Oh,hi!”“I've got something for you,”Peter said.“I sold the g ame and made $1,000.Thank you for your suggestion.” He handed her three $100 bills.“Wow!” the salesgirl cried out.“Thank you.I never expected it.”【写作指导】通读所给文章可知,本文属于记叙文。
首先要点一应表明主人公Peter一个月前买到了一款稀有的文字游戏;要点二要交代在售货员的建议下,Peter将此款文字游戏挂到网上拍卖;要点三讲的是故事的结果:文字游戏卖了1 000美元,Peter拿出300美元给售货员作为答谢。
由于本篇短文为记叙文,只需按照故事的情节发展进行写作即可。
写作时要把握好要点,全面准确地呈现短文内容,并注意语法结构和词汇的准确性。
【参考范文】One month ago,Peter bought a word game and found it was made about 40 years ago and hadn't been opened yet,which means it was rare and valuable.(要点1) He followed the salesgirl's suggestion and put it for auction on the Internet.(要点2) The word game was sold at $1,000 and Peter gave the salesgirl $300 in return.(要点3)【导学号:85602029】B(2016·宁波市镇海中学质检)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Why do parents have such a difficult time to communicate openly and honestly with their teens? For this,there are many reasons but most of them stem from not being able to properly understand their teens.It is a dangerous gap because parents will have to communicate with their teens about a wide variety of issues during the most important years of their lives.Thus,parents must know how to communicate openly and honestly with their teens.Here are a few tips to make communication easier between parents and teenagers.As parents,you should listen to what children said carefully and pay much attention to it.Make them feel as if their views really matter,which not only helps your discussions with your teen but brings you closer to him.Meanwhile,try to remember some of the negative feelings you experienced as a teenager and apply it to your teen's situation.Never make negative remarks to your teen about what she has said or done.Remember how much courage it would have taken for your teen to come and talk to you about his personal issues.So listen respectfully.If your teen is unusually angry,it may be time to spend a bit of quality time with your teen to determine what is wrong and where it is coming from.It is,therefore,necessary for parents to strive to keep lines of communication open at all times with their teens.Try to remember what it was like to be a teenager and how vulnerable(脆弱的) you felt.Then you will be well on your way to helping your teen communicate more openly and honestly.【写作指导】本文首先提出问题:很多家长不会和孩子公开、诚实地沟通。
接着就该问题提出几点建议:认真倾听孩子的心声;学会联系自己儿时的经历和孩子换位思考;学会尊重地倾听。
最后总结:学会倾听,和孩子好好交流。
【参考范文】There are various reasons for a difficult communication between parents and their teens.(要点1)Here are some tips:Try not to talk down to your teens.Imagine what it would be like to be a teen.Listen respectfully to your teens.Don't ignore your teens' feelings.(要点2)As long as you keep lines of communication open and remember what it was like to be a teenager,you will be well on the way to communicating with your teens.(要点3)C阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
During all kinds of holidays,millions of people will buy gifts for loved ones.Which is great—except that tons of those people will make the same glaring mistake,and buy the wrong gift.What's going on?Gift buying has become a deceivingly selfish pursuit.We don't actually look for things people want to receive.Instead,and to many of our gifts' detriments,we tend to look for things that we want to give.It's a subtle,but pretty significant problem.Research has shown that givers tend to value the gifts they buy considerably more than recipients.Gifts are valued roughly 10 to 33 percent less by recipients than what givers paid for them,Joel Waldfogel noted in Scroogenomics:Why You Shouldn't Buy Presents for the Holidays,his 2009 book on giftgiving.The discrepancy seems to come from a simple misplaced belief that thoughtful presents are the best presents.They are not.In fact,they might just be the worst presents.The more thought you put into a present,the more likely you are to strayfrom buying what the person you're buying the present for actually wants.In other words,people let their giftgiving egos get in the way of great presents.Especially when the recipient is someone they want to show they know really well.Fortunately,the answer to our collective insistence on guessing what people want is simple:stop it.If that's too callous,or impersonal,there's another helpful rule of thumb.Instead of buying restrictive gifts,like gift cards for specific stores,buy gifts that allow for flexibility,like gift cards that can be used more broadly (or,better yet,cash).People tend to prefer gift cards to actual gifts,and cash to both,Steffel explained.Steffel's latest research,which focuses on gift card giving,points to exactly this point—that versatility is the key to better gift giving.【写作指导】通读全文可知,本文是一篇议论文,按照提出问题、分析问题、解决问题的顺序来组织文章。