读后续写原文Sally’s birthday was approaching, and the excitement that usually filled her heart was now replaced with disappointment and stress. Turning eleven was a big deal, and she had always celebrated it with a grand party surrounded by her friends. However, this year was different. The burden of excessivehomework and her parents’ struggling business weighed heavily on her, forcing Sally to make the difficult decision of not having a birthday party, even though it was an event she enjoyed dearly every year.One day, during break, her best friend, Jane, with a curious look in her eyes, approached. “Are you going to have a birthday party this year?” Jane asked, sensing Sally’s sadness.“No,” Sally sighed and replied sadly, “There’s just too much going on and my parents are going through financial difficulties.”She smiled weakly, trying to conceal her immense disappointment and stress, but Jane saw through her pretence (假装) easily. Jane nodded thoughtfully and did not say anything. After the break, Sally saw her talking to one of their classmates, Sarah, secretively. Curious, Sally went over to them, but as soon as Jane saw her, she quickly walked away. Sally was startled by Jane’s strange actions and turned towards Sarah.“What did she say?” Sally asked.However, Sarah simply shrugged and walked away with Jane, leaving Sally standing there, feeling left out and anxious.What is happening? Sally wondered anxiously. Are they keeping something from me?As Sally’s birthday drew nearer, Jane was often found c hatting softly with her other classmates. Whenever Sally went over to them, they would just walk away or tell her that they were talking about a secret which Sally was not allowed to know. Jane has never kept secrets from me before, Sally thought. Her heart fell. Even hersadness with each passing moment, desperately trying to figure out what wasthey hiding?续写段首句：P1:On the day of Sally’s birthday, she went to school and found her classroom in total darkness.P2: Tears sprang from Sally’s eyes and her face broke into a radiant smile.解题思路step1:根据读原文时所划关键信息确定故事问题/矛盾（通常有两层：①事情本身；②通过事情所表达的情感/思想）读原文时需划的关键信息主要包括：①负面否定信息②与前者形成对比的信息③反复出现信息④问题信息⑤转折信息本文主要问题/矛盾：1 浅层：生日派对是否举办；朋友为何有那些行为举动是否疏远我2 深层：关于友情的感悟step2:根据题目已给的段首句与主要矛盾确定每段发展到什么程度P1: Sally 惊喜地看到朋友们为其精心准备的生日派对P2: 事情层面的矛盾在第一段都已解决，为了突出中心主旨，可以在第二段聚焦描写Sally与文中具体描写过的Jane或Sarah 之间的互动，最后引出对友情的感悟step3：每段具体设计：确定描写对象，从行为动作/语言、心理感受/神态表情两大方面交替描写各个对象，必要处添加环境等其他描写设计示例：P1：描写对象——Sally、朋友同学们Sally：好奇困惑，走进教室试图开灯同学们：亮起灯欢呼从角落窜出表达祝福拍手唱歌拿着蛋糕走进Sally 环境：教室精心布置生日蛋糕放在桌上Sally：明白了一切P2: 描写对象——Sally、JaneSally：激动惊讶语塞Jane：走进拥抱说话（具体语言内容结合文章线索设置，最好能突出文章中心主旨）Sally：感动；通过语言+动作（鞠躬等）表达感谢感悟: 对友情的感悟谨记：1. 必写高级句式：非谓、独立主格、定从、名从、倒装、强调2. 多从原文找线索，利用相关词汇，提高与原文的契合度英文写作示例P1:On the day of Sally’s birthday, she went to school and found her classroom in total darkness.Captured by infinite curiosity and confusion（利用非谓结构将情绪描写与行为动作描写结合到一句话）, she gently opened the door and attempted to reach the light switch. However, before she touched the switch, the darkness and silence were broken by rays of flashlight and cheers from her classmates who were just hiding in the corners of classroom.“Happy birthday to you! Sally.” “Wish you a memorable birthday!” They were clapping, singing and approaching to her with candles and presents in hands. What further amazed her （疑问词引导的名从）was that the classroom was elaborately decorated and a big cake of multiple layers was on her table. At this moment, all confusion and sadness were erased .P2: Tears sprang from Sally’s eyes and her face broke into a radiant smil e.So shocked was Sally that（倒装）she even couldn’t speak anything for a short moment. Then, Jane stepped forward and hugged her tightly, whispering in Sally’s ear,“I know you are going through a lot recently, but you have us, your friends, on your birthday a nd everyday.”（突出友情凸显中心主旨的语言内容）“Thank you, Jane. Thank you, dear friends. This is undoubtedly the most precious birthday party I’ve ever had.” Sally bowed and expressed her sincere appreciation to everyone, extreme warmth overflowing in her heart（独立主格结构）. It was on this birthday that （强调句）she became convinced her friends had never distanced themselves from her and they were even the most forting sunshine on those chilling tough days.下水文：P1:On the day of Sally’s birthday, she went to school and found her classroom in total darkness.When she hesitated to enter the room due to fear, a wave of fear and nervousness swept over her, and her heart pounded. She groped to turn on the light switch, but before her hand could find it, a chorus of cheers broke the silence. It's amazing, it's unbelievable! "The students, led by Jane, jumped out of various hidingplaces. The room was well lit, and Sally's eyes widened in surprise, incredulous. The classroom is decorated with balloons and ribbons, there is a very exquisite cake on the table, and there is a pile of gifts waiting to be opened in the corner.P2: Tears sprang from Sally’s eyes and her face broke into a radiant smile.She turned to Jane, who couldn't close her mouth at the moment. We know you can't hold a party this year, so we've decided to give you the party as a big surprise. Don't blame me for deliberately hiding you, "Jane said, her eyes full of pranks. This is indeed a grand birthday party, just like the ones she held before, which will be unforgettable for her whole life.。