（英语）英语书面表达提高训练含解析一、英语书面表达1．书面表达假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。
请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
写作要点：1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。
2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。
（2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。
（3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。
3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。
写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的应用。
写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。
开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。
此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
2．世界卫生组织的一项研究报告显示，我国青少年近视率居世界第一。
2019年全国两会当中“小眼镜”成关注重点，防控青少年近视迫在眉睫。
以下表格是学校针对本校学生近视问题做的调查表，假如你是校报编辑Jack，请根据所提供的信息，用英语写一篇调查报告，陈述学校调查结果，并表明你自己的观点和理由。
参考词汇：近视 nearsighted注意： 1. 内容须包括所提示的信息，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；3. 词数：80-100，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest inChina.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______【答案】According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, don't keep your eyes work for a long time. Don't spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don't read in the sun; don't read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eye-friendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming nearsighted.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据表格中的相关信息介绍一下如何保护视力。
所提供的表格中列举了近视的原因和建议。
主要从原因和建议两个方面去介绍。
时态为一般现在时。
注意作文中必须包含表格上的所有信息，并适当发挥。
写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。
语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。
写作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的视力对每个人都很重要。
本题运用句型：It is +形容词+for sb. to so sth.【高分句型二】And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 当你读这本书的时候，你应该把它从你的眼睛里移开一英尺。
when you read是由when引导的时间状语从句。
3．随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨大的变化。
请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。
内容包括：1. 你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？2. 它们的优点和缺点是什么？3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯，词数80左右。
开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me,【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones.By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。