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●Revised: Students should learn to analyze and solve problems independently. They should not rely on your teachers’ help.
●Faulty: She reviewed the lesson taught last week and all the exercises assigned by the teacher were done.
●Faulty: Those who wish to take Linguistics are expected to sign his name on this sheet of paper.
●Revised: Those who wish to take Linguistics are expected to sign their names on this sheet of paper.
●Revised: She reviewed the lesson taught last week and did all the exercises assigned by the teacher.
The faulty sentences are not coherent because of a confusing change in person, in number, in mood, and in voice respectively. A sentence should be consistent in these respects. Unnecessary shifts should be avoided.
●Confusing shifts in person and number,or in voice,tense,and mood
-voice 语态 -tense 时态 -mood (动词的)语气
●Faulty: An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize. ●Revised: An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, he should not plagiarize.
Exercise: When one is sick, you don’t want company. 修改： Battles between American Indians and white men came about because they oppressed them. 修改：because the latter oppressed the former
Tom was one of my students, who came late for class that snowy Monday. 修改：one of my students →the only one in my class
●Faulty: Students should learn to analyze and solve problems independently. Don’t rely on your teachers’ help.