3569学生作文易犯错误分析夏振邦批注页 1: [1] 批注 [B5] Billgates修饰语要紧靠被修饰的成份，如无法做到就要改变句子结构。

页 1: [2] 批注 [B6] Billgates定语从句which…不明确。

可改为：Keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.页 1: [3] 批注 [B8] Billgatesat the age of six的主语是my father，所以要改成：When I was six (years old), my father …页 1: [4] 批注 [B9] Billgates主语living standard和having carried out之间没有逻辑关系。

应改为：Since economic reforms have been carried out in our country, people’s living standard…页 1: [5] 批注 [B10] Billgates和前一句类似的错误。

应改为：To improve one’s writing skill, one must take a regular practice.页 1: [6] 批注 [B13] Billgatesit要改为they，和fruit and vegetables保持一致。

页 1: [7] 批注 [B15] Billgates第二个are要改为is，和主语one serious problem保持一致。

页 2: [8] 批注 [B18] Billgateswe应改为you。

祈使句的暗含主语为you。

页 2: [9] 批注 [B19] Billgates语法结构保持一致，前后用相同的结构，形成并列。

页 2: [10] 批注 [B20] Billgates结构要并列，可改为：While the number of vehicles is reduced, the speed of traffic can be increased.页 2: [11] 批注 [B21] BillgatesPeople want to eat not only more but also better.页 2: [12] 批注 [B22] Billgates比较级的可比性。

The price is milk isn’t higher than that of grain.页 2: [13] 批注 [B23] Billgatesa nation, the world, 和human beings是并列的结构，所以要改为：The energy problem iscurrently of great concern to a nation, to the world, and to human beings.页 2: [14] 批注 [B24] Billgates宾语从句中的that可以省略，但当有两个以上时，第二个起的that不可省略。

页 2: [15] 批注 [B25] Billgatesand前后的结构要并列。

可改为：and it is also beneficial to our characters’ training。

页 2: [16] 批注 [B26] Billgates错误类型同前。

可改为：warned me of the difficulty of the course and the length of it或waned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted。

页 2: [17] 批注 [B27] Billgates错误类型同前。

可改为：and its beautification of our cities。

页 2: [18] 批注 [B28] Billgates从句不能单独成句；没有动词的不能单独成句页 2: [19] 批注 [B30] Billgates改为：life, because we…页 2: [20] 批注 [B31] Billgates改为：environment, since …页 2: [21] 批注 [B32] Billgates改为：traffic, for example, widening the streets. 或traffic. For example, we may widen the streets and build …页 2: [22] 批注 [B33] Billgates改为：advantages, such as cleanness and cheapness.页 2: [23] 批注 [B34] Billgates改为：traits, such as a good sense of humor, …页 2: [24] 批注 [B35] Billgates改为：An example of this is the three big department stores, which are within a mile of each other页 2: [25] 批注 [B36] Billgates缺少必要的连词，不使用连词页 2: [26] 批注 [B37] Billgates缺少连词，可改为：If o ne should improve his English, he should overcome difficulties in studies.页 3: [27] 批注 [B41] Billgates在列举同一方面几点时应用for one thing, for another而on the one hand, on the other hand是指一个问题的两个方面。

页 3: [28] 批注 [B44] Billgatesfaster用错。

speed只与high, low, good, top, normal, fantastic, moderate, surprising搭配, 不与fast, quick, slow搭配。

但car可以和fast和slow搭配。

页 3: [29] 批注 [B45] Billgates错误类型同上。

price: high, low, inflated, moderate, minimum, original, popular, prevailing, published, reduced, reasonable; 不和expensive, cheap搭配。

但milk可以和expensive和cheap 搭配。

页 3: [30] 批注 [B46] Billgatesknowledge要和acquire, obtain, develop, enlarge, gain, pursue, deepen, accumulate, pick up等搭配。

页 3: [31] 批注 [B47] Billgatesopportunity: rare, scanty, little, poor; great, ample abundant, favorable, good, golden, convenient. chance: small.页 3: [32] 批注 [B48] Billgatespeople应改为：the number of people…因为people和decrease搭配意思是‘人变小了’。

decrease 和increase可和production, consumption, percentage等搭配。

类似有“看书”look book, see book。

页 3: [33] 批注 [B49] Billgates同上。

grain应改为：the consumption of grain…页 3: [34] 批注 [B50] Billgates主要表现在词的用错。

页 3: [35] 批注 [B51] Billgatesindustrious改为industrial页 3: [36] 批注 [B53] Billgateseconomic改为economical。

同样地，considerate，considerable；imaginary，imaginative；respectful，respectable，respective。

页 3: [37] 批注 [B54] Billgatescontinual改为continuous. continual为断断续续的“继续”；continuous为持续不断的“继续”，中间无“间断”。

页 3: [38] 批注 [B55] Billgateshighly改为high。

highly表示“非常，很”，a highly motivated person；或表示“赞许地”，speak highly of sb. 而表示“高”意时是没有ly的，score high，jump high。

同样，near，nearly；hard，hardly；页 3: [39] 批注 [B56] BillgatesFirst改为 At first意思为“首先”。

页 3: [40] 批注 [B57] Billgatesevery day改为everyday, 意思：日常的daily。

同样的，all together和altogether。

页 3: [41] 批注 [B58] Billgates及物动词和不及物动词，主动和被动页 3: [42] 批注 [B59] Billgateshappen为不及物动词。

Narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents to happen.页 3: [43] 批注 [B60] Billgatestake place没有被动语态形式。

A great change has taken place since then.页 3: [44] 批注 [B61] Billgatesoccur为不及物动词。

S ome new problems may occur.页 4: [45] 批注 [B66] Billgates比较级问题。

… will be far more beautiful than it is now.页 4: [46] 批注 [B67] Billgates非谓语动词，现在分词，过去分词的主动与被动页 4: [47] 批注 [B68] Billgatespolluting改为being polluted页 4: [48] 批注 [B69] BillgatesComparing改为Compared…页 4: [49] 批注 [B70] Billgateswill expose to…改为will be exposed to…页 4: [50] 批注 [B71] Billgatesstandard与improve应该是被动的关系，应改为With people’s living standard greatly being improved they can afford expensive goods.页 4: [51] 批注 [B72] Billgates习惯用法，冠词，单、复数页 4: [52] 批注 [B74] Billgatesby feet改为on foot页 4: [53] 批注 [B78] Billgates可数名词和不可数名词页 4: [54] 批注 [B80] Billgatesmuch useful information页 4: [55] 批注 [B83] BillgatesIf there are no power, factories would stop producing goods, cars, buses, and trains would have to stop running.页 4: [56] 批注 [B84] BillgatesThe number of bicycles…页 4: [57] 批注 [B85] BillgatesA large number of people…页 4: [58] 批注 [B86] BillgatesFewer and fewer people…页 4: [59] 批注 [B87] BillgatesEach person has…。