In this world, every family has a mother, a father, a daughter or a son. For plenty of people, families are very important. When you are very said, you can found one or two persons to make you feel happiness, this is your family. I am very gold to become my family member, because I have a pretty good parent and a fairly younger brother. When I come back, I always feel freedom and relaxed. My mother is a kind cook; she has lots of experience in cooking, so my brother and I are healthy. As a daughter， I shouldn't make my parents worry .As a sister, l should look after my brother. I want to be a great member of my family; I would try my best to do what I should do in the family
I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running. But as we all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up. But my parents encouraged me: “impossible is nothing," "you could challenge yourself!" So with the encouragement of them, I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the finishing line, I felt proud of myself. Though I didn't get a very good mark, I knew I had won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!
2012书信类作文 Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据所 给情景写一封不少于60词的信) Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. (假设你是Joe，你的好朋友Betty因为过于在意考试结果 而感到焦虑。请给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。
常见问题
1. 内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，总是用一些不合适的句子内 容来表达，所以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假，当然也就得不了高分。 2. 议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下，我们把议论当成的作文的重点，所 以常常会跑题。应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像，不能只翻译了事。 3. 总是使用同一个主语写句子，重复太多。尽量使用不同的主语来表达，比 如：I must learn English well. 就可以换成：It is important for me to learn English well. 4. 结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿，乱七八糟。应该使用总分或总分总的结构。 5. 都是简单句，缺少复合句。多用状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句及一些重 要的句型，可以用被动语态。 6. 连词的使用较少，句子之间的连接很生硬。可以加入一些：比如: to my surprise (让我惊讶的是), what’s more（而且，还有）等，让上文与下文衔接 更紧密。意思也能更流畅地表达。
A档 18~15分 B档 14.5~12分 C档 11.5~8分 D档 3.5~0分
每少5个词扣0.5分， 拼写错误每处扣0.5分， 标点，大小写错误每2处扣0.5分 内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上，得2~3分 内容和语言总分13~14分，如确有好句型或表达用语，可酌情给1~2分 通篇句型，句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，也不给分 开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。 然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。
2009命题作文 Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”. (以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占 格。) (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考) l. What do you want to do for your school? 2. Why do you want to do it? 3. How are you going to do it?
The wheel of life has rolled fast through the past fifteen years. By looking backwards, I’m so proud of myself because I’ve grown into a strong-minded person. It was the first time for me to climb a high mountain alone. At first, I felt my body was filled with energy. As time went by, tiredness made my step slow down. For many times, the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind. But the saying “Accumulated water becomes a river.” enabled me to move on. Though the power of one step seemed so weak, I insisted on climbing to the top. When I succeeded, I felt I had reached a new height in my life. How proud I’m of being a strong-minded person.
I’m a Member of the Singing and Dancing Club Hello, everyone! I’m very glad to be a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. I’m an actor in the club. I like singing and dancing very much. I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day. It makes me feel very happy.
I want to make school clean.You may think it is very simple.But I don't think so.Our teacher said,"School is your home,you should keep it clean."But I have never done anything to make school clean.For example,I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground.I also threw the rubbish on the ground.So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me.During this summer holiday,I will go to school to make school clean.Of course,I will do it with my classmates.We will make school clean every weekends next term as well.Now,do you think it is simple?
2011话题补全式作文 Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m a member of “ (以“我是……的一员”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格子” 提示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的一员，或者作为家庭，班级，社区额的 一员，写出你的经历，感受等。 Use the following points as a reference Are you glad to be a member of ……？ What do you do in it? How do you feel as such a member?