高考英语应对策略与基础写作指导2009-09-06第一讲:如何写人一、写作指导高考英语基础写作中的写人侧重人物的介绍,可以用第一人称(如写求职信),也可以用第三人称,时态常常用一般现在时和一般过去时,具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。
写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题:1.人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面,但英语基础写作需要严格按照写作要求来写,包括所给的`全部信息点,既不能遗漏,也不能随意添加。
2.对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组,安排好写作顺序,突出重点信息。
重点信息通常是写作的目的所在,比如求职要重点突出学历、经历,新闻报道要重点突出事迹,介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点,等等。
3.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。
4.注意运用正确的时态。
描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时,而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。
二、常用词语外貌特征:beautiful, big nose, black eyes,fat, good-looking,handsome, healthy, near-sighted,ordinary-looking, pretty,short,strong, tall, thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired,1.80 metres tall, etc.性格特点:absent-minded, attractive,bad-tempered,be ready to help others, bright,charming,confident, diligent,friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous,independent, kind, kind-hearted,lazy,narrow-minded, naughty,patient,think ofothers, smart,talkative, warm-hearted,wise,etc.出生年龄:a twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born on February 12th, 1987 , during his childhood, in one’s fifties, live a happy/ hard life, spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy, etc.兴趣爱好:be angry with sb for sth, be angry about, be delighted in doing, be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in one’s work, be wo rried about, do well in his research work, ,enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do, look forward to doing sth., long for (long to do), make rapid progress in, put one’s heart into, take a pleasure in doing; wish to do, work hard at his studies, etc.教育背景: be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in,fail in the test, get a master’s degree, get on well with one’s lessons, give sb. a passing grade, go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, his father was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an active part in class,when at college, etc.经历事迹: become a member of the team, concentrate oneself to doing sth., devote oneself to one’s business, do sth with great determination and perseverance, do research into this field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up one’s life for sth, have a good way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up one’s mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics, serve as nurse, set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try one’s best to do st h., win thefirst prize in the competition, win a gold /silver/ bronze medal, etc.他人评价:an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by all his students, be honored as, be considered as, be famous/known as, be regarded as, his hard work brought him great success, make great contributions to our country, one of the most important persons in the past ten years, consider sb. as a genius, consider sb. as the greatest leader, set a good example for all of us, speak highly of him, etc.三、实例分析【例1】李华自我介绍假设你是李华,申请到一家外资企业工作,你需要用英文给人事部经理写一封信,介绍自己的基本情况,简介信包括下表所列内容:姓名李华出生年月 1981年8月出生地广东省佛山市学历1994―2000 佛山第一中学2000―2004 广州大学计算机系2004―至今在一家计算机公司工作所学主要课程计算机、中文、数学、英语、体育特长爱好游泳(曾获得过大学游泳比赛一等奖),音乐写作要求:1.简介必须包括以上全部内容(信的开头和结尾已经写好);2.使用5个句子。
Dear Manager,I am waiting for your reply.Thank you.Yours Truly,Li Hua写作指导:文体记叙文,用第一人称信息组织①写信目的,到贵公司工作;②姓名、出生地点、日期;③学习简历;④学习内容,现在情况;⑤爱好和特长时态现在进行时,一般过去时参考范文:Dear Manager,I am writing you a letter in order to apply for a position in your company. My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August 1981. I studied in Foshan No. 1 MiddleSchool from 1994 - 2000, and then I came to study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four years. I studied computer science, Chinese, maths, English, P.E, and now I am working for a computer company. I like pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first prize for swimming in the school competition.I am waiting for your reply.Thank you.Yours Truly,Li Hua【例 2】介绍姚明和刘翔假设你是李华,正在美国参加学习,课堂上老师要求你简要介绍我国的名人,你选择了姚明和刘翔,两位体育明星,他们的基本情况如下:姓名姚明刘翔出生 1980年,上海 1983年,上海事迹世界著名篮球运动员,现在美国NBA火箭队效力,球队主力队员之一,多次进入美国全明星队。
多次获得世界110米栏冠军,2004年雅典奥运会冠军,不久以后还打破了世界记录。
爱好听流行音乐音乐,唱歌写作要求:1.简介必须包括以上全部内容(开头已经为你写好);2.使用5个句子。
3.参考词汇:火箭队 Rocket, 110米栏110-metre hurdling,雅典奥运会――the Athens Olympic GamesHi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang.____________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you!写作指导:文体记叙文,用第三人称信息组织有两条线索:一是分别对比两人的各项情况,二是先介绍姚明,再介绍刘翔。