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【7A文】雅思写作小作文TASK1

第一章图表作文概述图表分成Linechart,table,piechart,barchart,flowchart(3次)一、审题ThegraphbelowshowsradioandtelevisionaudiencesthrougWriteareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformatiYoushouldwriteatleast150words.0.00%10.00%20.00%30.00%40.00%50.00%6:8:1:12:2:4:6:8:1:12:2:4:6:RadioTelevisionThediagrambelowshowstheaveragehoursofunpaidworkpe rweekdonebypeopleindifferentcategories.(Unpaidworkreferst osuchcategoriesaschildcareinthehome,houseworkandgardenichildren children chldrenThetablebelowshowsinformationonincomes,taGesandpricesinfivecitiesaroundtheworld.Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformations hownbelow.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.0102030405060708090审题:1、审题目:(题目相关的内容和时间)2、审文字:图标文字信息,比如坐标轴数据代表的信息,度量单位(图三)3、审数字:注意:有时不止一个图表,先判断图标之间是否有联系,若有,就一起描述,若无则分开描述;若我们无法看出其中联系,最好分开描述。

(图五)1)不描述所有数据。

2)遵循时间、最高原则。

3)随后描述最低数值和有特点的数值4)线图(Line):描述图表运动趋势而非单个数据;另外三种中,将数据分组描述。

图2范文Thetwopiechartscomparedifferentmethodsofcommunicationusedin1962 and1982.Wecanseethatforthethreemediumssurveyed,therearesignificant changesforeach.In1962,letterwritingwasthemostpopularformofcommunication,takingup 50%ofthetotal.However,itsusedecreaseddramaticallyafterthat.In1982,this figuredroppedtoonly10%,thesmallestofthatyear’sfigure. Ontheotherhand,duringthissameperiod,wecanseethattheuseofthephone andcomputersbothincreasedsignificantly.In1962,theuseoftelephonejusto ccupied35%andcomputerwastheleastusedformofthethree(15%).In1982,t hetelephone,withapercentageof60%,hasbecomethemostusedformofcom munication.Similarly,theuseofcomputersdoubledto30%.图1范文TVandradioaudienceintheU.K.differsharplythroughouttheday.Predictably, TVattractslargeraudiencesthanradio,butintheearlymorninghours,theradi ogetbyfarthelargestsharewhile,intheevening,TVviewersaremostactive. Lookingatthecourseofadayfromtheearlyhoursinthemorning,weseethatth eindeGforradiolistenersgrowssharplyfrom5%toapeakof25%justbetween6 :00and8:30AM.Fromthatpointon,thenumberoflistenersdeclinesatagradua lratetoeventuallyreturntotheoriginalvaluewiththeeGceptionofanon-signif icantslightsurgeinthelateafternoonandatbedtime. Whileradiolisteningstartsrisingintheearlymorning,theTVwatchingleveliscl osetozero.Asthedayproceeds,weseeaconstantupwardfluctuationthatcom estoapeakof45%around8:00PMwithariseat8:00to10:00AMandanotheron eat1:00to2:00PM.From8:00PMon,asteadydeclinetoabout38%isfollowedb yadropto,again,almostzerointheneGtfewhours.一般分成2个部分:介绍段、主体段(Tobecontinued)04/09/20GG第二章介绍段不抄题目,改写题目。

1)换动词2)同义替换3)加入图表中其他信息(时间、国家)题目:Thegraphbelow shows theenrolmentsofoverseasstudentsandlocalstudent sinBritain’suniversities.Thegraph providesanoverview abouttheproportionofoverseasstudentsa ndlocalstudents enrolled inBritain’suniversities from1989-1999.题目:Thegraphandtablebelowprovideinformationaboutwateruseworldwidean dwaterconsumptionintwodifferentcountries.(剑6/30页)试改:Thegraph,combinedwiththetable(coupledwith),provideanoverviewabout globalwaterconsumptionfrom1900to20GGandwaterusedintwocountriesi n20GG1.图表unfoldsaclearpictureabout2.图表provideanoverviewof informationthetypesofmusicpeoplepurchas eintheUK.Atfirstglance,weseethat classicalmusicisfarlesspopularthanpoporrockmusic.3.图表belowdisplays/indicates theaverageearningsperweek,inpoundsst erling,ofpeopleofdifferentlevelsofeducationlivingintheUKbetween theyears1965and1995.改写:练习剑4第一段。

作业:改写剑5第一段。

第三章主体段(2-3段)一、展开框架:1)不描述所有数据。

2)遵循时间、最高原则。

A..若出现一组时间,以时间为切入点进行描述,比如1998年-20GG年期间,可以从1998年开始描述。

B.若在同一年代出现可以比较的数据,可从最高值为切入点,如1998年出现不同领域的数据,可从最高值开始描述。

C.若图标无时间,以最高值为切入点来描述3)随后描述最低数值和有特点的数值4)线图:描述趋势而非单个数据;另外三种中,将数据分组描述。

二、主题段句子写作宝典:将数字逐一写出是一种让阅卷官呕吐不止的写法,But,好句子一般有三个部分1)文字信息2)数字信息3)比较例子1:TheaverageUSfamilyhad4.5peoplein1919,3.3in1967and2.6in20GG.(吐)改后:Averagefamilysizein the US has been shrinking,from3.3 people in 1967 to 2.6 people in20GG, compared with 4.5 people in 1919.例子2:Non-metropolitancountieshadapropertycrimerateof1,250per100,000peo ple,andmetropolitancountieseGperiencedarateof2,529offensesper100,00 0inhabitants.改后:Thepropertycrimerateinnon-metropolitancountieswasrelatively low,1,250 per 100,000 people,less than half the rateinmetropolitancounties(2,529offensesper100,000inhabitants).好例子:ThelowestwagesarefoundinHongKongandAthens:3and4poundsrespec tively,butwhiletaGesarealittlehigherinAthensthaninHongKong(18.9%vs.1 5%),rentsarebyfarcheaper(700vs.2400pounds).更多例子可参考104页《套路剖析》,熟悉这种写法。

三、写好主题段落的关键!Task1小作文词汇分类详解&例句1.上升/增加:我们可以使用的套用结构有:动词:increase/rise/climb/eGpand/swell名词:increase/rise/climb/eGpansion/swell△BigIncrease1.Thebiggestchangeoccurredintheperiod1985to1995,when highschoolgraduates enjoyedthegreatestincreasein earnings.2.Overthethirty-yearperiod,therewasabigincreasein earnings amongst peoplewithhighschoolcertificates(£85).3.China eGperienced/sawasignificantrisein computer-relatedwork.4.Therewasadramaticincrease,in1970,i nthenumberof universitygraduates.5.Japan eGperiencedamassiveincreasein carownershipinthe1930s.6.Therewasasignificantdifferencein themoneypeoplespentonCDsintheNorthernTerritoriesbetweenAugustandSeptember,from25%to4 8%.7.Aslightincreaseoccurredbetween1940and1950inBrazil.8.After1940,therewasasignificantincreasein thenumberofimprisonments,reaching90thousandin1980,athree-foldincrease from1930.9.InGreatBritain,in1930,imprisonmentfiguresstoodat30,000.However,they increasedthreefold,to90,000by1980.10.Threeyearslater,in1996,bothcountries sawamarkedincrease.11.Infact,1997sawahugeincrease from329,000accidentsinthefirstquartertoamassive764,000accidentsduringthesecondquarter.12.It increasedsubstantially atthebeginningoftheyear.△SmallIncrease1.Duringthesameperiod,peoplewithaDoctoraldegree increased theirearnings bytheleastamount.2.TheNorthernTerritories,duringthefirstpartoftheyear,eGperiencedaslightincrease from10%inJanuaryto15%inMarch.3.Peopleho ldingaBachelor’sdegree onlymanagedamodestincreaseof£5perweek,reachingalevelof£145in1995.4.Thenumberofmeninthesector roseonlymarginally from425,000to480,000inthesameperiod.△Gradual/SteadyIncrease1.Therewasagradualincreasein earning amongst peoplewithauniversitydegree.2.Whilewomen showedasteadyincrease,malesmokersdroppedsharplyafter1980,but beganasteadyincrease again after1990.3.Therewasasteadyincreasein computeruseinallcategories.4.India eGperiencedasteadyrisebetween1940and1960.5.FollowingaslumpinsalesduringApriltoJune,Queensland sawasteadyrisein spendingbetweenJulyandOctober.In1990,thenumberofmalesmokers diminishedsignificantly toonly13 %,whilstthenumberoffemalesmokers rosesteadilyto22%.6.Apartfromadeclineinthe31to45agegroup,overall,America sawasteadyclimb afterabout21,from18%to40%.△SharpIncrease1.Therewasasharpincreasein theUSAin1970from5million to8million.Therewasasecondsignificantincrease in1990to11million,followe dbyamassiveleap to24millionin20GG.2.Mobilephoneuse increasedinbigleaps inJapan,reachingapeakof32millionin1990.3.Mobilephoneuse increasedto2millionin1980,with asuddenandmassiveincreaseto17millionin1990.4.Earningsingeneral rosesharply between1965and1995.5.Japanremainedmuchlowerthanothercountries,fluctuatingbetween6%and14%duringthewholeperiod.TheeGceptionbeingafterabout 55yearsofage,whentherewasasuddenleapto36%.6.By1968thisincreasedto170,and increasedagainbutmoresteeply to320in1977.7.Thenumberofwomen grewsharply from25,000toover100,000.句型总结一:A+形容词(猛,大,小,稳等形容词)+上升(名词)occur/happeninSTH Thereis/was+a形容词(猛,大,小,稳等形容词)+上升(名词)inSTHSTHshow/eGperience/seea+形容词(猛,大,小,稳等形容词)+上升(名词)STHbeona+形容词(猛,大,小,稳等形容词)+上升(名词)STH上升(动词)+副词((猛,大,小,稳等副词)猛:sharp,steep,sudden,shocking大:huge,significant,dramatic,massive,substantial,小:tiny,small,modest,slight,marginal稳:steady,stable作业:改写Overthethirty-yearperiod,therewasabigincreasein earnings amongs t peoplewithhighschoolcertificates(£85).China eGperiencedasignificantrisein computer-relatedwork.上面第五种句型STH上升(动词)+副词((猛,大,小,稳等副词) 还可以用其他方式表示上升的程度,这样句子会更灵动。

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