高考作文专题-慰问信
• 3.表示鼓励 4.打算为她做什么
• 5.祝她早日康复
•Dear Amy,
• I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. What shocking news to me when i was told that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. I quite understand how you feel now.
• 2. 听到……我深感难过_______________________
I was so sorry to hear of the news that…
• 3. 请接受我最深切的慰问______________________
Please accept my deepest sympathy…
• 4. 我无法相信…… ___________________
So I will inform all my friends of your situation and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will gain enough money for you to be cured.
Hope you can go through the difficulty and make full recovery soon.
• 11. 我祝你快速康复_I__w__i_s_h__y_o_u__q__u_i_c_k__r_e_c_o_ very
• 12. 渡过难关__g_o__t_h_r_o__u_g_h__t_h__e_d__i_ff_i_c_ulty
(四).必备句式
1.听说水灾毁了你的家,我难过极了。
__I_w__a_s_s_o__s_o_r_r_y__t_o_h__e_a_r_t_h_a__t _t_h_e__fl_o_o_d_______ __d_e_s_t_r_o_y_e_d__y_o_u_r__h_o_u__s_e_.._
• 6.convey ____传__达______ •7.sympathy__关__心__,_同__情__,_ 慰问 8.deeply___深__深_地______
• 9.shocked____震__惊______
(三).必备短语
• 1.我很抱歉知……
• __I__a_m__d_e__e_p_ly__s_o_r_r_y__t_o__hear that…
__W___e_a_l_l_r_e_a_l_l_y_h__o_p_e__th__a_t_y_o__u_w__i_ll__m_a__ke a full recovery soon.
(五).慰问信的结构
• 第一段:引出事实(写作背景),表达惋惜 和同情; • 第二段:安慰对方或鼓励对方或者提出给 予帮助 •第三段:表达愿望和祝福。
Concerned about your present situation, I’m going to see you on behalf of the whole class on this Tuesday afternoon.
What a pity that you can’t teach us for a few days! Nevertheless, there is no need to worry about our study since we’ll spare no efforts to make up for the lost lessons. Last but not least, if there is anything we can offer to help, please don’t hesitate to contact uf__t_h_e_r_e_i_s__a_n_y_t_h_i_n_g__I_c_a_n__d__o_t_o__h_e_l_p__y_o_u, ___p_le_a__s_e_l_e_t_m__e__k_n_o_w__.________
7.我们真心希望你能很快完全康复。
4. 祝你很快度过(难关)。
_I__w__is_h__y_o_u__g_o__t_h_r_o_u_g__h_t_h__e_d_i_f_f_ic_u__lt_y__s_o_o_n_._
5. 大家都希望你早日归来。
_W__e_a_r_e__a_l_l_h_o_p__in__g_y__o_u__w_i_l_l _b_e__b_a_c_k__s_o_on.
I do expect your quick recovery. Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
(二).必备词汇
•1.sorrow _悲__伤__(__名_词__)__sadness 2.flood___洪__灾__(_其__他__常见自然灾害的词?) •3.go through ___渡_过__,__熬__过__ 4.recovery___恢__复_,__康__复__ • 5.wish___祝__愿_______
Don’t worry about your studies. We’ll try to help you make up the lessons you have missed because we are good friends. I hope I can come and see you soon on Sunday.
Everyone in our class misses you very much, hoping you’ll be well and recover soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Yours,
Li hua
• 例题2:
• 你班同学Tom生重病住院两个星期了,同学们都很 难过。今天班主任要去医院看他,并请你代表全班 同学些一封慰问信,要点如下:
• 1.表示同情和关心
• 2.送他一个包裹(幸运星和千纸鹤;现金一万元)
• 3.祝他早日康复,返校上课
• 参考词汇: 幸运星:lucky stars 千纸鹤:paper cranes
解题步骤:
1)审题 : 确定写作的信件类型:__慰问信_______ 确定人称:第一,第二人称 确定时态:现在时,过去时,将来时
2)列提纲:用自己的话将题目要求的要点陈述出来。
开头:不认识的要做自我介绍,但是认识的不用问 候。引出收信人遭受的不好事件,并表达惋惜同情。
上周末踢球摔伤住院 内容:① 询问伤情 ② 打算去看望
• But you should realize that you are young and have a bright future. So stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.
作文专题复习 慰问信
•(一).文体概述
• 慰问信是指在同学、亲友考试失利、生病、
受伤或遇到火灾、水 灾、地震等不幸事件时, 对对方表示慰问的信件。慰问信要写得真诚 并注意措辞,要围绕一个中心,鼓励对方并令 其得到安慰和鼓舞。
• 内容常包括: 对不幸事件表示同情→进 行安慰和帮助和鼓励→再次表示同情并希望 其早日复原。
例题 1:
• 据报道,7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患 肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中,美国 抗癌协会(ACS)决定,每当Amy收到一封慰问信, 就给她增加3美分的治疗款。 假如你是新华中学的 学生李华,请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信,主 要内容包括:
• 1.自我介绍 2.得知的Amy的情况
We are all hoping…
• 8. 我相信你会成功……
___I_a__m__s_u__r_e__y_o_u__w__i_l_l_s_ucceed in… • 9.完全康复 __m__a__k_e__a__f_u_l_l_r_e_c_o__v_e_r_y
• 10. 出院 __l_e_a_v__e_t_h__e_h__o_s_p__it_a_l____
③ 告诉他不要担心你们的学习
结尾:表达对收信人的美好祝愿和祝福
Dear Mr. Brown, It was such a shock to hear that you were badly
injured while playing football last weekend. Are you feeling any better now?
Our head teacher will come and pay you a visit today so we ask him to bring you a package with some lucky stars and colorful paper cranes in it. I hope you will like it and it will bring good fortune to you. Also you’ll receive 10,000 yuan, which will help you pay the medical fees.
I couldn’t believe that…
• 5. 请转达我对……的同情
_____P_l_e_a_s_e_c_o_n__v_e_y__m__y_s_ympathy to… • 6. 最好的祝愿……_B__e_s_t_w__is_h__e_s_f_o_r_…______
• 7. 我们都希望…… ________________________