点睛之笔：
• Nothing is impossible to a willing heart! • Practice makes perfect • Never give up/lose heart • If you have any trouble, please turn to me for help. • I’d like to share my methods with you. • Only in this way, can you learn English well • read novels, magazines and everything to do with
4.I am writing to you for the purpose of ----5 I am writing to share some advice with opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.在下认 为， 如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种
语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多
用一般现在时和一般将来时。
写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句
A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that … 2．I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter
记好笔记 Set / write down Make/take notes
课后认真独立完成作业
Finish your homework by yourself/on your own/don’t copy 每天进行英语听说练习
Practise listening and speaking every day
书面表达如何写？
三 Step 1 List the key points
个
Step 2 Make sentences
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学 的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议， 帮助他学好英语。
内容提示：1. 一定要做好课前预习
写作步骤
首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单 介绍自己，注意语气。
主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点， 然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情 况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要 让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。
结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注 意有礼貌使读者容易接受。
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要符合英
提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。
give you some advice on English/learning English/how to learn English
I will give you some suggestions which I think may be helpful to you.
2. 课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记
3. 课后认真独立完成作业
4. 每天进行英语听说练习
5. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量
第一步：列举要点
• 英语学的不大好
You are not good at English You don’t do well in English You have difficulty with English You are not getting along well with English
明智的选择。
B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议， 井然有序。 1.first，firstly，secondly…．then， after that，in the end．finally．。 meanwhile ．．．
2 .I think it would be more beneficial if
加强课外阅读扩大词汇量
Enrich/enlarge your vocabulary.
• 注意衔接词使用: • 表先后次序： • First, second, third….Finally • Firstly, secondly，…eventually • to begin with/ to start with, at last
A letter of giving advice
写作攻略 1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建 议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个 问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给 某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或 忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提 出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语 气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明 扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
Here are my suggestions/tips on ….
做好课前预习 preview Prepare/ make preparations for Look through 课堂上认真听讲 Listen to the teacher carefully Pay attention to what the teacher says carefully
you could ------我想如果你能-----可能会更好
建议信结尾常用句式
1.I believe you will take my advice into account. 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/ 有用/有帮助。 3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。
• 递进关系： furthermore；moreover； not only...but also...； not...but...；, besides； in other words；on the one hand...，on the other hand...； meanwhile； at the same time；