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中考英语写作PPT课件

主要特点
记叙为主 稍加议论 旁带说明
能力要求
主要问题
要点不全 线索不清
原因:步骤不对
书面表达 六步法
书面表达六步法
审抄抓书面来自表达改扩

书面表达六步法
一、审题
确定基本要素:5W1H 何时何地何人为 何如何做了何事
书面表达六步法
二、抓要点 确定主要行为
What happened?
书面表达六步法
③He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing.
④The car was so fast that the old man even didn’t have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.
About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
Li Hua
年轻妇女
颜色:黄
AC864
写在最后
成功的基础在于好的学习习惯
The foundation of success lies in good habits
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结束语
当你尽了自己的最大努力时,失败也是伟大的, 所以不要放弃,坚持就是正确的。
When You Do Your Best, Failure Is Great, So Don'T Give Up, Stick To The End 演讲人:XXXXXX 时 间:XX年XX月XX日
书面表达经典示例
假设你是李华,在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清 晨,你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一 份材料,报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写 出报告。 1、目击者应该准确报告事实; 2、词数100左右; 3、结尾已为你写好。
________________________________________ _ About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
Li Hua
附图
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At 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000, I saw a woman driving a car hit the man in the street.
第二步 抓要点
一幅图,一要点 抓要点,配动词
时态直达 语态到位 介/副词紧随
第三步 扩展成句
把要点变成完整 的句子。 注意使用介/副词
第四步 连句成文
词与词搭配 句与句相连 增加细节 呼应首尾
第五步 查错改错
主谓一致吗? 时态正确吗? 时态正确吗?
有“半截话”吗?
第六步 誊写
卷面整洁不一定加分, 卷面潦草一定要扣分!
作业选评
要改进吗? 为什么?
①At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. ②I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.
三、扩展成句 形成基本语义单位 Who did what?
书面表达六步法
四、连句成文
时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应
书面表达六步法
五、查错改错
要尽量剔除错误
书面表达六步法
六、誊写
卷面不工整扣5分
课堂练习
请用六步法 写一篇短文
第一步 审题
认真读题然后找出
五个 “W”一个 “H”
把答案写在题中相应的位置
⑤I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didn't. ⑥Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.
⑦Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. ⑧After that, I went over to check out the old man.
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