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In addition, innovation makes difference. Especially in today's
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business world, since competition is becoming increasingly fierce, differentiation plays an indispensable part in business success. A creative idea in the marketing department means remarkable increase in sales and tremendous margin of profits. For example, Avon, one of the most famous cosmetic producers, creates a distribution system as direct sales by "Avon Ladies." They encourage their existing customer to work as their sales representatives, selling their products to friends, families and neighbors. Having experience in using the products in person, words of these "Avon Ladies" are convincing to others and make unexpectedly great effects to increase the sales. Companies that only stick to traditional ways are at a severe disadvantage to those that make effective use of creative thinking.
point)并都支持thesis statement ▪ topic sentence尽量置于段首，每个topic
sentence都得到充分展开。段内每个句子都支 持topic sentence. ▪ conclusion重申thesis statement。
▪ 1.词汇和固定短语要识记，主要是3类: ～环境的，经济的，社会进步等题目 经常涉及的名词或者名词短语;～表示 程度等的形容词和能够恰当修饰动词 的副词;～起承转合作用的连接词和短 语。 2.在正确，易懂的基础上，力求句型 的变化多端，插入语，从句，倒装， 虚拟等。 3.看清题目要求写什么，有比较的， 要写出两者的不同，不要只说你支持 的。
▪ 6.分论点一出就要有example，两三个case足以,并且 事例逻辑上能够支持原因。 7.整篇文章不要出现第二人称you，your，这是前辈 的指点(指点了pumpkin，然后她又“数落”我的)， 多用people;你想，you就是阅卷人，你凭什么张口就 用人家的书面语言教导人家呢?
▪ 8.个人的观点:尽可能的避免单独使用he/she，考虑到 性别歧视问题。但是，如果你要顶字数的话，也请用 he or she 。 9.口语化是初级者的大问题之一，写作文的时候往往 是先想中文该怎么说，然后做个翻译工作;本来对非母 语就很能驾驭，这样一来，说大白话，就直接导致句 式的单一;所以还是要看看真题阅读文章的文法。
use specific reasons and examples
to support your answer
▪ 要求通过使用清晰而又合适恰当的解释、例子等 细节做到全文良好的组织和良好的展开。理由和 例子势必是全文必备之精华。
▪ 段落展开的方法有很多，举例论证、因果论证、 对比论证还有让步论证等
▪ Group tours plan travelers’ entire route.
Because their trip has already been arranged,people do not have to worry about where they are going or how they are getting there. For example,my family once took a package tour to America. The travel agency arranged everything. It took care of the hotel reservations, transportation, and sightseeing. Thanks to the travel agency, we could just relax and enjoy our entire trip.
Would you freely express your opinion that you had never seen a dress as the one she was wearing and just spoiled her birthday? Inarguably, hiding the truth in some situations can be quite handy indeed.
▪ 举例论证：提出论点→适当延伸支持论点→给出 例证（细节）→得出结论。即每个论点都要有理 由，每个理由都要有例子，每个例子都要有细节 。
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从例证的内容来看，我们可以使用个人经历、一 般性例子、假设情况、名人事例、调查研究和权
威引言。
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一，个人事例
When it comes to the merits acquired from parttime jobs, I could think of no better illustration
二． 一般性例子
2) Doctors think that an active person should have a restful hobby, while a person who sits at a desk should have a lively hobby.
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▪ Doctors think that an active person, such as a baseball player or a swimmer, should have a restful hobby such as reading, collections of stamps, dolls, buttons or shells and so on, while a person who sits at a desk all day, such as a teacher or a doctor should have a lively hobby such as tennis, golf, swimming or skating.
托福写作之段落展开
上下义词
tools
tableware
vehicles
instruments
spoons chopsticks forks
trucks tractors
cars sedans SUVs
ships
orchestra planes
Percussion instruments
Mercedes BMW Toyota
(2007.6.2) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Before going to university, one should spend a year on travel or taking one job.
▪ 2. The tedious knowledge of university will be more acceptable and interesting if traveling before university.
上下义词
tools
上义词到下义词的演 变过程
tableware
vehicles
instruments
spoons chopsticks forks
trucks tractors
cars sedans SUVs
ships
orchestra planes
Percussion instruments
Mercedes BMW Toyota
▪ 1. Taking a job before university study allows you clearly know what you should get from university.
（2）举在Google上班的话，那么会意识到要好好学习计 算机和数学。
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(2007.6.2) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Before going to university, one should spend a year on travel or taking one job.
▪ 4.不同的reason不要糅合到一块 去，每段中心要明确，且reason段落 要用英文写作的方式，开门见山的在 段落开头指出;既然要成段，那么你 所 选择的topic sentence一定要能扩展， 也就是有东西好写，而且容易些。虽 然一个论点你可能有N个理由，但那 些很有道理，但是你用英文无法表达 清 楚的，就不用写了，这不是上万字 的论文。
上下义词
tools vehicles
主题句
cars sedans