excitement
face body voice
Her cheeks turned red and her eyebrows narrowed.
She clenched her fists and jammed them into her sides.
She growled at me through clenched teeth.
face body voice
face body voice
秀，不要说—环境
thunder windows
wind
Thunders were roaring 狂吼
Biting rain was violently beating against the windows The trees were dancing madly with wind in the
into her pockets and turned her face away from the biting wind. •
• 我们来对比一下两句话，第1句话，作者直接告诉读者她很冷，而第2 句话则通过她的一系列动作，把衣领拉高，裹紧围巾，手插到口袋里 并把脸侧开来躲避刺骨的寒风，让读者真真切切地感受到了“冷”。两
• “秀，不要说”是一种写作技巧，广泛应用于小说和非小说的各种写作 中，意思是让读者自己去从文字的描述中体验故事的含义和情感，而 不是被动地接受作者直白的描述和陈述。从读者的能动性来说，前者 中读者是主动的，后者中则是被动的。
• 如：1.She felt cold. • 2.She pulled her collar up, tightened her scarf, shoved her hands deep
rain.
秀，不要说—环境
sound stars
Not a single sound could be heard except my own heartbeat.
Clusters of stars decorated the vast sky, weakly shining in the
moon-eclipsed darkness.
moon
Like a dim lamp, the moon
shone above.
秀，不要说—环境
秀，不要说—环境
• Choose a person, a scene, a moment, etc.
• Create a detailed and vivid descipition (looks, feelings, actions, surroudnings.)
秀，不要说—情感Βιβλιοθήκη face body voice
His smile broadened from ear to ear.
He clapped his hands together and jumped up and down with joy.
He giggled and squealed with