高三英语复习---书面表达高分技巧（20120307）By Zhang Shiqin Teaching aims:we are trying to teach sts how to write a good composition, or how to make a composition better so as to get a good mark in an examination especially in the National College Entrance Examination.Teaching Procedures:Step 1高考英语书面表达高分卷常识一．高考英语书面表达题材特点、体裁特点及出题模式：1. 题材特点：紧扣课标，教材和考试说明；贴近现实生活和学生生活实际，易于表达；突出考查学生实际运用语言的能力。

2.体裁特点：利用各种体裁，以应用文（致辞、发言稿、记叙文、议论文）为主。

3.出题模式：叙事+ 议论，写人+ 议论二．近年高考英语写作高分卷的五大特点：1.行文逻辑科学，条理性好；2.巧用过渡词汇，逻辑性强；3.巧用高级词汇和复杂句式，文章品味高；4.妙用变通式表达，文章错落有致；5.书写规范工整，整体效果好。

三．英语写作高分卷的七大原则、八项注意︰七大原则八项注意主题句原则注意审题一二三原则注意人称分段原则注意时态长短句结合原则注意巧用连接词多实少虚原则禁用汉式英语短语优先原则注意书写词句多变原则注意用有把握的词句注意检查四．高分卷书面表达段落的核心要素︰1. General structure Topic sentenceSupporting sentencesConcluding sentence2. Linking words3. Advanced expressions Various structuresGraceful wordsStep 2怎样写出高分作文一．仔细审题Analyze the topic carefully1.审文体。

高考书面表达体裁主要有记叙文、说明文、应用文和议论文等。

2.审格式。

在开始构思之前一定要认真阅读写作要求中的所有信息，确定好基本时态。

特别要注意人称的使用。

3.审要点。

要点齐全，切勿遗漏。

倘若有生词提示，一定要用上。

二．巧妙谋篇Organizing the writing artfully考虑文章结构、段落结构，保证所写文章脉络清楚,条理分明。

General structure Topic sentenceSupporting sentencesConcluding sentence三．精心表达Expressing your thoughts in words1.要点齐全，选择适当的词语或表达方式。

2.扩展成句，在保证正确的前提下，力求句式丰富，使用较高级词汇和较复杂句型，为文章增添亮点。

如：谚语、with结构、被动句、倒装句、定语从句、强调句型、名词性从句、非谓语动词等。

3.巧用关联词语(Linking words)。

附：1. 常用关联词语but also..., rather than 1）表示平行或选择关系as well as, together with, not only…2）表示转折关系however, in spite of, otherwise, while3）表示对比关系on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand...4）表示因果关系therefore, as a result (of), owing to, due to, thanks to.r one thing ... for another, eventually 5）表示时间、顺序关系firstly, …secondly, …,fo6）表示递进、强调关系what’s more, in addition, worse still, moreover, furthermore,above all7）表示解释、说明关系such as, for example, for instance, in other words, and so on8）表示结论in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion4.纠错誊写。

注意时态语态人称是否正确,词数是否符合要求,是否有破句等。

修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定区域，卷面要整洁清爽。

附：2. 常用过渡句1. With the rapid development of economy, China has become increasingly prosperous.2. Now an increasing number of people are coming to realize the importance of English.3. A proverb says/As the old Chinese saying goes…（常言道…）（毫无疑问）4. There is no doubt that/No one can deny that/Needless to say, …5. My idea/opinion may be expressed as follows:（就…而言）6. When it comes to…7. Despite the fact that…8. Those who object to…argue(maintain/say /argue) that…9. Recent years, there is (has been) a sharp increase(growth/rise/decline) in/of…10.It is known to all that…/As we all know,…11.Those in favor of…believe that…12.The answer to/explanation of this problem involves many factors. For one thing,some…For another, others…13.This will lead to/give rise to some serious consequences.14.It is important that effective action should be taken to deal with /cope with…15.Weighing the advantages and disadvantages of…16.All in all, it is hoped that great efforts should be made to…17.Taking all these factors into consideration,we may come to the conclusion that…18.Only when/if/by/in…can we…19.There is no doubt/denying that attention must be paid to the problem of…20.From what has been discussed above, we may arrive at/come to/reach the conclusionthat…21.It is high time we put an end to…22.Judging from what we have discussed above,…Step 3高级词汇及佳句赏析1. 亮点词汇get/acquire/obtain/gainuse/make the best of/make use of/take advantage of/apply/employnow/nowadays/at present/currentlysay/put/state/claim/describejoin/participate/attend/take part in/ go in for/engage in/be present atpay attention to/focus on, center on, concentrate on, be absorbed in, be lost intry to/attempt to/make efforts to/manage tocannot wait to/be eager to/long for/be thirsty for/look forward tomake…believe/convince/confirm/assuresee/spot /witness/catch sight of/come acrossoppose/be opposed to/object to/be againstsee…as/regard as/consider as/look on as/treat as/view as/refer to asprove/turn out/confirmbe related to/be connected with, have sth to do withvery big/tremendous, huge, giant, enormousbecause of/due to, owing to, thanks to, on account ofhave/own, possessexpensive/precious, valuable, treasured, dear, costly,clever/intelligent/ brilliantbe used to/be accustomed to/be adapted to/be adjusted togood/wonderful, excellent, splendid, magnificent, impressive, marvelous, fantasticmore and more/increasing/growing numbers of…most/the majority of/ the large percentage ofnot only…but also/as well as/more than/both..and…if…not/unless/without/ but forcause/result in, give rise to, lead to, bring aboutprevent/ban/forbidfinally/eventually/sooner or later/at length/in the endsolve/settle/deal with/cope with/handleinfluence/affect/have effects onscold/blame/accuse/condemnenough/sufficient/adequate/amplegive up/desert/abandon/quit/sacrificegrow/increase/add to/go up/riselie/be located/be situated/stand/sitrich/prosperous/flourishing/booming/well-off/wealthy/abundantdifferent/a variety of/varioussuddenly/all of a sudden/unexpectedlyexperience/go through/undergo/endureform/be made up of/consist of/be composed of2.with结构、被动句、倒装句、定语从句、强调句型、名词性从句、非谓语动词1)Having designed a questionnaire and plan for the project,we had a heated discussionabout the tasks everyone should undertake, and the way we carried it out.2) We spent lots of time searching for relevant information both from books and the Internet,which proved to be very useful for our study.3) By participating in the research, I realize that no matter what difficulty you come across inyour life, remember that as long as you don’t lose heart, you are sure to find a way out.it is essential that4) Since praise and criticism both play vital roles in children’s education,parents should try to maintain the balance between love and strictness.5) What is illustrated in the picture is that Father is too hard on their child while Motherspoils him.6) At least 18 people passed the seriously injured girl before finally an old woman who waslater discovered to be making a living by collecting scraps came to her rescue.7）I’d like to remind my friend to take t he lead in protecting the environment. With everyone doing his bit, we are sure to change the present situation.8）As is vividly shown in the picture, a country boy is crying helpless in the darkness, longing eagerly for school education, in contrast, the city boy on the right is enjoying all the benefits.9）When put into effect, the regulations will surely help reduce the number of accidents and benefit schools and families as well. Also, they will be of vital importance in stabling thesociety.10）To solve this problem , the government should spend more money on the improvement of education in rural areas. Meanwhile, the media can appeal for t he public donations forrural education.Moreover,all people in the community should be aware of the seriousness of the problem and do whatever to help. Only if we do these can we have more social justice and thus make our society more harmonious.3.常用谚语Strike the iron while it is hot. 趁热打铁。