Proper transition
Use advanced words, phrases & sentences
Paragraph 8:
My dad leaned in close & whispered in the auctioneer’s ear. Q1: What would my dad whisper to the auctioneer?
1. My dad told the fact to him and decided to buy the vase. 2. The auctioneer asked for agreement. 3. Nobody opposed and my parents took me home with the vase. 4. My dad used oil to get my hand out together with the keychain.
Who:
What:
the author; his parents; auctioneer
auctionat the ___________ art gallery Para1 I was taken to an ______ downtown where everything was for ______. sale Para2.3.4 Since nothing ______ caught my eye, I climbed upstairs and ate some _____ on snacks while ______(lean) leaning the railing(栏杆). As I pulled a pack of mints from my ______ pull pocket to get rid of onion _______, breath I _________ accidentally out my keychain, which dropped inside an expensive _____. vase I ran downstairs to stage a _______ rescue but unfortunately my hand was ______. stuck I felt embarrassed __________ auctioneer began Para5.6.7 What's worse, I heard the _________ the auction with the vase. Everyone was walking toward parents me, including my ________.
The underlined key words: auction parents snacks and drinks keychain vase dropped rescue my hand stuck auctioneer
Paragraph 8: My dad leaned in close and whispered in the auctioneer’s ear
What's the style of the passage?
A. Narration(记叙) B. Exposition(说明) C. Argumentation(议论)
A.Development B. Climax(高潮) C. Beginning D. End Para(8) Para(5.6.7)
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The Story of The Herd Boy and The Weaving Girl met each other and fell in love
got married and had babies
the Goddess got angry
forced to leave each other cross the Milky Way to meet only once a year
surprised
Q2: How would I feel?
embarrassed/nervous
Q3: What would my parents do?
asked for what had happened
The underlined key words: auction parents snacks and drinks keychain vase dropped rescue my hand stuck auctioneer Paragraph 7: Everyone was walking toward me, including my parents.
Paragraph 7:
Everyone was walking towards me, including my parents.
With the entire room staring at me, they were whispering in surprise why I was holding the, “Ladies and gentlemen, since it
appears this vase also comes with a red-faced young man, are there
any objections to letting his parents purchase the piece at a reasonable price?” I heard some laughs at the idea of a bidding war breaking out for a vase with me attached, but luckily no one did. “Sold to the parents of the, uh, lucky young man!” The auctioneer
The way to get me out of the vase
Tip1 Solution [positive/creative]
Paragraph 8:
Tip2 Language: [formal/informal]
My dad leaned in close and whispered in the auctioneer’s ear. The
Para(2.3.4)
Para(1)
The underlined key words: auction parents snacks and drinks keychain vase dropped rescue my hand stuck auctioneer
？
underlined words（选5个以上）
told my trouble and asked if he could buy the vase
Q2: Did they agree or not?
Yes.
Q3: How did my dad get my hand out of the vase?
used vegetable oil/soapy water to slide my hand out
my dad
wisdom/ get me out of trouble idea
Paragraph 7:
Everyone was walking toward me, including my parents. Q1: What's their feeling when seeing me holding a vase?
1. They were very surprised. 2. I felt very embarrassed and nervous. 3. My dad asked me what had happened. 4. I told the fact to my dad.
My hand was stuck in the vase. Use transitional words（过渡语） add some details Use advanced words, phrases & sentences
If the story doesn't end here, imagine...
An auction
conduct the auction auctioneer拍卖人 __________________ make a bid for the lot bidder出价人 ___________________ fine pieces of artistry and craftsmanship lot拍卖物 __________________________________ __________________________ for appreciation and for sale
I felt very embarrassed and nervous.
Then my dad made his way to me and asked, “What are you doing?”
My dad asked me what had happened.
Nothing was going to sound more unbelievable than the truth. “My hand is stuck,” I said in a low voice. “Oh, Mark,” my mom cried.
who (人物）：parents auctioneer scene（场景）： auction vase keychain dropped vase（事件）： my hand stuck rescue
Focus on the connection of the two given sentences Paragraph 7: Everyone was walking toward me, including my parents. Paragraph 8: My dad leaned in close and whispered in the auctioneer’s ear.