高一英语短文改错专项练习(一)命题人：右臂审题人：左膀 2016.11.8高老师的左膀右臂祝大家期中考顺利~假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

ANearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!BIt is three years now since I graduate from Xinhua High School. Last Sunday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed a precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places.CI'm an Australian boy aging 17 and I'm crazy about music. It is one of the most important thing in my life. I listen music whenever I can. I have a minidisk player, with it I can have access to music whether walking in the street or ride on the bus. At home, there has a CD player in my room, and the music is on all the time.I like rock music best of all. My favorite band is Rolling Stones, which had produced 40 albums since 1966. It so happened that there was a living concert of Rolling Stones last Sunday. I decided to go. It was a great fun. I am also fond of classical music. I especially enjoy playing Beethoven once I am doing my homework.DETime fly like an arrow. I'm already in the second half of Senior Grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little more than three months before I graduate middle school.At the present, I'm busy review my lessons in order to take the College Entrance Examination. I hope to go to Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not only in China but also in the world. I'll try my best turn my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also studying very hard to realize their dreams. I do wish everyone will be able to enter an university or college.FIn order to promote participation in outdoor exercise, our school had organized an activity to climb the West Mountain on April 10. The moment we arrived at the foot of a mountain, we set out for the top in high spirit. We supported each other to pass the rocky areas on the course of the climb. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, there we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was extremely beautiful This event was very benefit, for not only we take a break from our heavy school workload, but we also learned what to cooperate. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!答案and解析：A1:before—ago. ago “从现在起的若干时间以前”；时间段+ago与一般过去时连用。

before泛指“从过去起的若干时间以前”，意思是“距过去某时……以前”“与其……（毋宁）”，常和完成时连用，这里谓语动词planted用的是过去式，故用ago。

2:在……的帮助下用固定搭配with the help of。

所以把by改成of。

3:根据句意和前面的all these 可知，用可数名词year的复数形式years。

all these years 的意思是这么多年。

4:根据时间状语Since then可知，本句用现在完成进行时。

所以把 had 变成have。

5:as a result 是固定搭配。

所以在As和 result之间加a。

6:因为哪里落了种子就在哪里长，所以这种植物长得到处是。

所以把somewhere（某地）改成everywhere （到处）。

7:这种果子个头小，但是汁多、味道好。

这里放在are后面，应该用形容词。

所以把taste改成tasty。

8:根据后面的them可知，这里用many表示可数名词的许多，而much修饰不可数名词。

所以把much 改成many。

9:英语中although是连词，but是并列连词。

所以不能同时用。

所以把but改成yet或去掉but。

10:tomatoes 是名词，应该用形容词来修饰。

副词常常修饰动词。

所以把wonderfully改为wonderful。

B1:graduate→ graduated 毕业是一个过去发生的事情，使用过去时2:on→ in 在具体的哪个班级使用介词in3:time后加to 固定句型it takes sb some time to do sth4:well→ good time是名词，应该使用形容词修饰5:a→the 冠词错用。

根据句意，此处特指：“聚会的那一天”，应该用定冠词the6:remember→ remembering remember与we构成主动关系，用现在分词7:they→ we与上文一致，是我们熟悉的人8:which → that that引导起真正的主语从句9:to去掉多介词。

abroad为副词，表示“到国外；在国外”用go abroad，无需再加介词to10:card→ cards根据上下文可知这里应该使用复数形式C1.aging-agedaged作形容词，意为......岁的，后跟数词，只能作后置定语，这是aged的特殊用法2.thing-things one of+形容词最高级+可数名词复数3.listen后加to listen为不及物动词，在加宾语时必须借助介词to4.it-which 本句为定语从句，此处指代minidisk player，且在下半句中作with的宾语，所以应用关系代词which来引导。