Para 3: A specific example
One morning she told her children about aa ffaammiillyy she had vviissiitteeddtthheeddaayy before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy - his name was Bernnaarrdd - had interested her very much.
their families were struggling to make ends meet.
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Para 2: General statement
主题句：Bernard is positive and optimistic.
拓展句：He always sees the glass as half full, not half empty and tells me that a man only can be destroyed but cannot be defeated.
What
Beginning
2. read deeply and thoroughly the given story subtopic
two given sentences details
The given story:
How did y wanted to help
Development
转
Transition examples
承
Development
General
起
Introduction
合
Conclusion
Topic
How to make your writing
coherent?
topic / theme general statement specific examples /details conclusion / ending
MMrrss.. Meredith was aammoossttkkininddanadnd tthhoouugghhttffuull woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.
主题句：John is very helpful.
拓展句：Whenever you are in trouble, he is always the first one who comes up and gives you the shirt off his back.
细节支撑句：Once my computer was attacked by Trojan horse, it is he who spent four hours helping me get rid of it.
细节支撑句：Last term, when he failed again in the maths exam, he complained nothing but reviewed the paper again and again.
细节支撑句：Whenever I feel frustrated or disappointed, I will think of him.
English continuation writing 读后续写
How to make your writing coherent? (连贯)
Warmming up: My daddy is a liar.
Daddy is the sweetest Daddy in the world; Daddy is the most handsome,
the smartest, the most clever, the kindest; He is my superman; Daddy wants me to do well at school; Daddy is just great. But he lies. ......
He lies about having a job; He lies about having money; He lies that he's not tired; He lies that he's not hungry; He lies that we have everything; He lies about his happiness; He lies because of me ... I love you, Daddy!
What is the theme of the story? help each other meet the challenges
To be coherent in writing,
1. stick to the topic / theme
To be coherent in writing,
Para 1: Background + Topic
The Meredith family lived in a small
community. As the economy was in decline, some
people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of