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• if time and money are making it impossible, then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive. • However, visiting the online college fairs at , if not possible to see for yourself for lack of time and money, will be beneficial. • For students who are short of money and time, registering online is a good alternative to help them better understand schools. • Finally if you lack time and money, using online college fairs could be another option.
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• It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same. Nothing will give you the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college campus(校园) like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms, classrooms and athletic equipment and, of course, the students. It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to happen to be more than a car • But keep keep in in mind mind that that you you are are making making a a ride away. But decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one.
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1.It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply • It's really worthwhile to pay a visit to your desired colleges personally before applying. • A campus visit before applying is a great way to get a genuine feel for your prospective colleges. • To ensure a brilliant college life, you'd better spare time to visit campuses to examine all aspects of your dream colleges , even if it may be costly.
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2.if you live nearby, go check it out! students should visit their local colleges, which may be included in applications. If you live nearby, be sure to check it out before you apply. make sure you explore the schools near you, as it may help with admission chances.
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• ①It's really worthwhile to pay a visit to your desired colleges personally before applying. ②Undoubtedly, students should visit your local colleges, which may be included in applications. ③At least, they should visit the school and figure out its real conditions in advance. ④For students who are short of money and time, registering online is a good alternative to help them better understand schools.(63字）
• There's no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area. In fact, a lot of college applications evebviously, if you live across the country that won't be as much of a possibility, but if you live nearby, go check it out!
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3.If campus visits aren't going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools you'd like to attend. • Even after submitting applications, a visit can help avoid much trouble. • At least, they should visit the school and figure out its real conditions in advance. • You should at least visit the schools in person before enrolling to avoid things you dislike.
• If If campus campus visits visits aren't aren't going going to to happen happen before before you you apply, apply, at at the the very very least least you you should should find find some some time time between between applying applying and and getting getting your your acceptance acceptance letters letters to to visit visit the the schools schools you'd you'd like like to to attend attend. It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now the things that you don't like about certain campuses, things that you wouldn't know unless you actually visit.
• 要点1：为确保一个精彩的大学生活，你最好抽出时间到大学校 园看看你梦想大学的方方面面，即使这可能要花钱。 • To ensure a brilliant college life, you'd better spare time to visit campuses to examine all aspects of your dream colleges , even if it may be costly. • 要点2：如果你住在大学附近，你一定要在申请之前检看一下。 • If you live nearby, be sure to check it out before you apply. • 要点3：甚至在申请之后，到大学去看看也会有助于省去许多麻 烦。 • Even after submitting applications, a visit can help avoid much trouble. • 要点4：如果因为缺少时间与钱不能去看的话，登陆 参加大学网上展览会也是很有益的。 • However, visiting the online college fairs at , if not possible to see for yourself for lack of time and money, will be beneficial.
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• ①A campus visit before applying is a great way to get a genuine feel for your prospective colleges. ②Thus, make sure you explore the schools near you, as it may help with admission chances. ③You should at least visit the schools in person before enrolling to avoid things you dislike. ④Finally if you lack time and money, using online college fairs could be another option. (65 words)