2009年6月A级预测作文(恩波英语研究所)预测作文(一)Directions: This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to write a letter of Application according to the following information given in Chinese. Remember to do the task on the Composition/Translation sheet.假设你叫张明,是北京大学经济系2005年毕业的一名学生.毕业后就职于北京经济研究所。
现在你想申请到哈佛大学读MBA,2009年10月入学,写一封入学申请信,介绍一下自己的情况,并索要相关的信息。
●审题概述●本文要求写一封入学申请信。
首先要注意写作的格式,包括收信人、写信时间、称呼、内容、祝愿语与签名等。
正文要按照题目所述意义阐述清楚,包括个人信息、申请的专业、索要相关信息和本人联系方式。
写信时注意语言既要得体又要展示自己的优势,忌过于夸大自己的能力。
●范文●July 20th, 2008 Dear Sirs,I read with great interest the prospectus (说明书) of graduate studies of your university. I am interested in the courses on economics. I wonder if you could consider me as an applicant for the MBA course of Economics beginning in October, 2009.I graduated from the Economics Department of Peking University. After my graduation in 2005, I have been working at Beijing Institute of Economics for three years. I hope you can send me relevant information about the course. Please contact me by email.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Yours truly,Zhang Ming [思路点评]第一段开门见山点出自己的兴趣和要申请的专业,语言得体,态度谦和;第二段介绍个人状况,包括学生经历和社会经历,很好地展示了自己的优势所在;最后表达自己期待得到对方回复,并附了自己学习期间的成绩记录表以供考核。
[高频词句]1.catalog and application forms招生简章和申请表2.I dearly hope that you will consider my application favorably.恳请您考虑我的申请事宜。
3.I am most anxious to hear from you.急盼复。
4. My solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.我的扎实学术功底能满足贵校研究生学习的入学要求。
Directions:This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to translate a letter of declining an invitation to a celebration party. Remember to do the task on the Composition/Translation sheet.我外出几天之后于今天上午回到办公室,见到你们为庆祝“十·一”发出的邀请,为此我向您表示感谢。
我本能够接受邀请,但不巧我同几个外国朋友事先约好会见,他们正好那天到达,以致不能如愿以偿。
这次希望你们见谅,深信以后有机会见面、结论您和您的同事们。
●审题概述●本文要求写一封拒绝邀请的信函。
首先注意写作格式。
正文部分要按照题目的要求分别进行论述,写作的重点在于阐述不能接受邀请的原因并表达遗憾和希望对方谅解。
●范文●Dear Mr. Zhang,On my return to the office this morning after being away for a few days, I found your kind invitation of the October 1 awaiting me, for which I thank you.I should like to have been in a position to accept your invitation for the Octorber 1, but unfortunately due to a prior engagement with some overseas friends, it will not be possible to do so.I hope you will excuse me on this occasion and sincerely trust an opportunity will present itself to meet you at a later date and make the personal acquaintance of yourself and your colleagues.Yours sincerely,Li Yang [思路点评]本文分三段进行阐述,分别对应题目中的三点要求。
首先对邀请表示感谢,其次阐述不能受邀的原因,语气委婉,并带有遗憾之情;最后表达希望对方谅解和希望以后有机会见面的礼貌客套之语。
全文语气和缓,语言礼貌得体。
[高频词句]1.I hope you’re not too busy to come.我期望您会在百忙中光临。
2.Request the pleasure of恭请……3.We sincerely hope you can attend.我们期待您的光临.4.kind invitation of the October 1 awaiting me看到你们为庆祝“十·一”发出的邀请5. sincerely trust an opportunity will present itself to meet you at a later date深信以后有机会见面Directions:This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to write a letter of Inquiry(询价信)according to the information given in Chinese below. Remember to do the task on the Composition/Translation sheet.内容:我厂对贵公司生产的男女自行车及童车感兴趣,能否请贵公司寄一份产品目录表和价格表。
我公司是武汉最大的经销商。
并在十个地区设有分公司。
如果贵厂的自行车质量令人满意,价格合理,我们将大量订货。
发信人:王刚(销售部经理)Words for Reference: dealer经销商●审题概述●本题要求写一封询价信,属于商业信函的一种。
根据题目,要求对方寄来产品目录和价格表。
出于这种商业信函的表达习惯,文章开篇可以表示对该公司的赞赏并指出对其产品感兴趣,接下来切入主题,要求对方寄来产品目录、样品说明书与样品,并询问产品价格、折扣情况和支付条件等等,最后表达希望双方合作愉快的愿望。
商业信函要求语言简单明了,主题突出。
●范文●Dear Sir or Madam,We have seen the advertisement of your bicycles on television, and we are very interested in your machines for both men and women, and also for children. Would you please send us a copy of your catalog and current price list for bicycles?We are the leading bicycle dealers in Wuhan, and have branches in ten neighboring districts. If the quality of your machines is satisfactory and the price is reasonable, we will place regular orders for fairly large numbers.We look forward to your reply!Yours sincerely,Wang GangSales Manager[思路点评]本文是一篇较简单的询价信,分三段阐述。
第一段表达对对方产品感兴趣并要求对方寄来产品目录和价格表;第二段先简单介绍自己公司的情况,紧接着表示若条件满意会大量订货;最后表达期待对方回复。
全文主题突出,言简意赅,语言、语气均符合商业信函的特点。
[高频词句]1.we are very interested in…我们对……感兴趣2.Would you please send us a copy of your catalog and current price list?能寄来你们的产品目录和价格表吗?3.place orders 下订单Directions: This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to write a letter of Recommendation according to the information given in Chinese below. Remember to do the task on the Composition/Translation sheet.请以陈含老师的名义为张丽君写一封推荐信。