第三步 句式要美
1．句2合并升级为ving作结果状语
As_we_all_know,_cars_give_off_poisonous_gas_such_as_carbon_dioxide,_causing_global_warming,_frequent_natural_disasters_diseases_and_so_on.
3．为了保护我们的环境该到我们绿色出行的时间了。
In_order_to_protect_our_environment,_it is time for us to go green.
4．首先，我们应该让人们知道绿色出行的重要性。
Firstly, we should let the peopleknow_the_importance_of_going_green.
书面表达针对练(五)倡议信
题目要求
(2017·烟台适应测试二)
假定你是育才中学学生会主席李华，你校即将举行主题为“Let's go green now”的一项环保活动。请你用英语写一封倡议信，要点包括：
1．倡导绿色生活的原因；
2．实践途径(至少三点)。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Firstly, we should raise people's awareness of the importance of going green. Secondly, using public transportation or riding bicycles instead of using cars can make a great difference to the problem. What's more, we should take full advantage of water, electricity, paper, food and so on. Last but not least, it is a good idea to classify our rubbish and recycle it in our daily life.
That's all. Thank you.
Students'_Union
Li_Hua
改写两用
这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。
Boys and girls,
With the development of society and economy, human beings has damaged the enviroment seriously and we are faced with severely problems like global warming, frequent natural disasters and more disease. In other words, going green means protect ourselves.
Everyone can play a active part in the campaign. First of all, we can try to use public transportation or travel on foot or by the bike. Besides, we should cherish that we have and make good use of water, electricity, paper, food etc. We can start by exchanging their secondhand books for others. Finally, if possible, classify our garbage and recycle it. Start now or we'll make a great difference.
2．句3升级为It's time that...句式
In_order_to_protect_our_environment,_it_is_high_time_that_we_should_go_green.
3．句4高频词汇升级know
Firstly,_we_should_raise_people's_awareness_of_the_importance_of_going_green.
5．其次，使用公共交通或骑自行车而不开私家车对这个问题有重大意义。
Secondly,using_public_transportation_or_riding_bicyclesinstead of using cars canmake_a_great_difference_tothe problem.
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2．众所周知，小汽车释放出有毒气体例如二氧化碳，造成全球变暖，频发的自然灾害、疾病等。
As we all know,cars_give_off_poisonous_gas_such_as_carbon_dioxide. It causes global warming, frequent natural disasters, diseases and so on.
3．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Boys and girls，
I'm honored to give this speech. ____________________________
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That's al Union
Li Hua
Students' Union
Li Hua
四步作文法
第一步 审题谋篇
1．体裁倡议信
2．时态一般现在时为主
3．人称第一人称和第三人称
第二步 要点要全
1．随着社会和经济的发展，私家车的数量以惊人的速度发展。
With_the_development_of_society_and_economy,_the_number_of_private_cars_is_increasingat a surprising speed.
Everyone can play active part in the campaign. First of all, we can try to use public transportation or travel on foot or by bike. Besides, we should cherish we have and make good use of water, electricity, paper, food etc. We can start by exchanging secondhand books others. Finally, if possible, classify our garbage and recycle it. Start now we'll make a great difference.
That's all. Thank you.
Students' Union
Li Hua
答案：
Boys and girls,
With the development of society and economy, human beings damaged the enviroment seriously and we are faced with problems like global warming, frequent natural disasters and more . In other words, going green means ourselves.
第四步 衔接要顺
Boys_and_girls，
I'm_honored_to_give_this_speech.With development of society and economy, the number of private cars is increasing at a surprising speed. As we all know, cars give off poisonous gas such as carbon dioxide, causing global warming, frequent natural disasters, diseases and so on. In order to protect our environment, it is high time that we should go green.
6．我们应该充分利用水、电、纸张、食物等。
We shouldtake_full_advantage_of_water,_electricity,_paper,_food and so on.
7．在日常生活中垃圾分类，循环利用是个好主意。
It is a good ideato_classify_our_rubbish_and_recycle_it_in_our_daily_life.