高考英语书面表达典例精选1.假如你是李华,你的美国笔友John 对刚进入的高中生活不太适应,请你写信告诉他你的想法,内容要点如下:1. 鼓励其广交朋友;2. 积极参加体育活动,强身健体;3. 努力奋斗进入理想大学。
注意:1. 可加入一些细节,使文章更加通顺合理;3. 词数100左右(信的格式已给出,不计入总词数)【答案】Dear John,I'm so pleased to hear that you've been in Senior High School. And maybe you need a couple of months to adjust yourself. Here are some good tips for you.Firstly, a life without a friend is a life without a sun, so why not make a lot of good friends and enjoy helping each other? Secondly, we can take an active part in sports in our spare time so that we can get into shape, which will surely be good for our further study. Besides, it's our duty to study hard to make sure that one day our dream of entering a key university will come true.I believe you'll get used to it soon and wait for your good news.Yours,Li Hua 【解析】这是一道应用文写作,要求学生以李华的名义写一封信给美国笔友John,就他不适应刚进入高中生活不太适应的问题发表自己的看法。
内容包括:1)鼓励其广交朋友;2)积极参加体育活动,强身健体;3)努力奋斗进入理想大学。
写作时,考生要选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。
根据对题目的分析可知,审本文主要使用一般现在时来写作,描述时,学生要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。
难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。
还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。
2.假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地音乐厅要举办中国音乐会。
请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:(1)写信目的;(2)个人优势;(3)能做的事情。
注意:(1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯【答案】Dr. Sir,Hearing that there's a concert concerning Chinese music will take place at the local music hall, I intend to apply for the position of a volunteer.For starters,due to my insatiable curiosity associated with Chinese folk art,I apply to be a volunteer in the hall during my su mmer break in London. In addition, I was born to have the capability to conduct people,and therefore my strength lies in organizing. Last but not least,since the visitors coming to the music hall are on a national scale,it is my duty to maintain a normal order throughout the concert.Judging from what I've stated, you're bound to have a gist of it.But words fail to convey my sincere gratitude if I were chosen to become a volunteer in the music hall.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【思路点拨】这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。
动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达。
写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点短语】1.take place发生;2.due to由于;3.apply to应用;4.in addition除此之外【高分句型】1.Hearing that there's a concert concerning Chinese music will take place at the local music hall, I intend to apply for the position of a volunteer.译文:听说有一场关于中国音乐的音乐会将在当地音乐厅举行,我想申请志愿者的职位。
(现在分词作状语)st but not least, since the visitors coming to the music hall are on a national scale, it is my duty to maintain anormal order throughout the concert.译文:最后但并非最不重要的是,由于来音乐厅参观的人是全国性的,我有责任在整个音乐会期间维持正常秩序.(since引导原因状语从句,it是形式主语,不定式内容是真正的主语。
)3.假定你是李华,你校学生会创办的你最喜爱的《英语月报》(English Monthly)向读者征集意见。
请你给主编写封邮件,内容包括:(1)自我介绍:(2)说明该报优点:内容丰富;指导英语学习;(3)提出建议:多介绍中国传统文化及励志故事。
注意:(1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear editor,___________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Editor,I'm so glad to give my personal opinions on my favourite newspaper English Monthly set up by the Students' Union. I'm a high school student who has been exposed to English for 8 years and is enthusiastic about reading newspapers .I want to learn something from the newspaper.I think English Monthly has many advantages. For one thing, it's rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization. For another, it's a guide to English learning. By reading it, I can have a good knowledge of what's going on all over the world and I've improved my English reading skills. It is suggested that you introduce more about Chinese traditional culture and inspiring stories in it.I really hope English Monthly will attract more readers.Yours sincerelyLi Hua【解析】【思路点拨】写作时,应该注意以下几点:1.人称:题目要求是假设你是李华,请你给你最喜欢的《英语月报》写封电子邮件,给出建议,所以应以第一人称为主;2.时态:以一般现在时为主;3.写作要点:1)自我介绍;2)说明该报的优点;3)提出建议。
4.句子之间和段落之间使用关联词,如For one thing,...For another 等,使句子通顺,全文意思连贯;5.在能力范围内使用亮点词汇和高分句型,以此增加文章的亮点,提升文章的档次;6.书写工整,词数100左右。
【亮点短语】1.be enthusiastic about...对......热心;2.be rich in content内容丰富;3.range from ... to ...范围从......到...... 【高分句型】1.I'm a high school student who has been exposed to English for 8 years and is enthusiastic about reading newspapers .(who引导限制性定语从句)2.Foe one thing, it's rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization.(现在分词短语ranging from economy to civilization作状语,表示“伴随”状况)3.It is suggested that you introduce more about Chinese traditional culture and inspiring stories in it.(it做形式主语,that从句是真正主语)4.假如你是李华,你的外国笔友Tom对学习汉语汉语很感兴趣。