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2. 性格气质（character） kind-hearted好心的， warm-hearted 热心的， absent-minded 心不在焉的， bad-tempered 坏脾气的， a strong will很强的意志力， naughty 淘气的， smart/bright 聪明的， wise睿智的， hard-working/diligent 勤奋的，
经历
尽量用复合句,倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章
注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组
His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things.
• 7. 成就(achievement) • excellent /outstanding /remarkable出色的 • be good at/ do well in… 擅长 • famous/well-known at home and abroad国内外 著名的 • make great/rapid progress in 在…取得很大/快 速进步 • overcome many difficulties/go through hardship克服困难 • set a good example to为……树立好榜样 • speak highly of… 高度赞扬… • be honoured as…被授予……
影响
成为"感动中国"的人物(Moving China hero).
① In May 1923, Dr Huo Yingdong was born into a poor family in Hong Kong. ② At the age of ten, his father died. ③ After 1955, he was engaged in architecture, shipping, petroleum and became a famous person at home and abroad. ④ Since the beginning of the reform and open policy, he had donated over 10 billion dollars to sponsor education, culture, sports, and public welfare in Mainland.⑤ He has made great contributions to constructing and benefiting our country, which makes him a Moving China hero.
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1. 外貌（appearance/look） good-looking相貌英俊的 funny-looking外表可笑的 ugly-looking丑陋的 ordinary-looking 外貌平平的 white-haired白头发的 near/far-sighted 近/远视的 charming有魅力的 fashionable时尚的 slim 苗条的 fat胖的 lovely 可爱的
同位语 身份与 生平
尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺
注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼
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②Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age 定语从句 of 3. 状语从句 ③ When Jay's first album was released in 2000, he got the world's attention. ④ His popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升), which allowed him to receive many awards for his songs.
Commonly-used sentence patterns
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• 1. 介绍概况：同位语结构、分词结构，使文 章简洁。如： • (1)Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family (一个贫苦家庭的儿子), was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. [同位语] • (2)Sun Shuwei, a world champion in diving ( 一位跳水的世界冠军), is a boy of 14 from Guangdong. [同位语] • (3)Born in Maryland, USA in 1985(他1985年 出生于美国马里兰州), Michael Phelps is a famous swimmer.[分语短语]
• 5. 教育背景（schooling / education background） • be admitted to …university考取……大学 • graduate from …department of … university 从某大学某系毕业 • receive/get a doctor’s degree获取博士学位 • go abroad for further studies 出国深造 • When at college, he majored in French/he was a French major. 读大学时他主修法语
• 3. 生日、出生地 (birth/age) • …, (who was) born in …, is a… • 4. 家庭背景（family background） • … was born into a poor/rich family出生在贫穷 的/富裕的家庭 • as a child of … years old, he…还是个……岁的 孩子时 • his/ her father was very strict with him… 父亲 对他//她严格要求 • spend his childhood in …在……度过了他的童 年 • live a happy/hard life生活很幸福/艰苦
• (2)In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal (在他打破世界纪录并获 得金牌之后), he became the idol of the youth. • [分词短语] • (3)Not only does he show interest in science (他 不但对科学极有兴趣), but also he has a gift for music. [倒装句式] • 4. 评估：尽量运用短语。如： • Lei Feng set a good example to us (给我们树立 了一个良好的榜样), so all the people show great respect to him (很敬重他).
Jay Chou(周杰伦)
分词结构 • ① Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.
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Allen Stewart, ① an Australian old man, born on March 7, 1915, is already the holder of the world record for being the oldest graduate. ② He thinks that it is never too late to learn to challenge oneself to achieve something worthwhile. ③ He got his degree in 1936, later along with a doctor’s degree of medicine. ④ He decided to study law in his eighties, and he received the master’s degree in 2006 , which was his third degree. ⑤ In 2012, he received his fourth degree by networking, who won praise for his proper arrangement on his study schedule. ( By Jackie Yi 2012广东)
• 2. 描写外貌：巧用with短语。如： • My history teacher is a beautiful woman, with long hair and big eyes (她长着两只大眼睛，留 着长发). • 3. 生平事迹：尽量用复合句、并列句、非谓 语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。如： • (1)In his life, he got many honours, one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award ( 其中包括获得“2005感动中国年度人物”的称 号). [定语从句]
•6. 主要事迹（main events） •serve as做……工作 •devote oneself /one’s effort/one’s life to; be devoted to 致力于 •make up one’s mind to do/be determined to do 决心做 •have a gift/talent for / be gifted/talented in 有 ……的天赋