• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
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• We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report.
work
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• Most people travel . • Some people stay at home. • Some other people visit friends or
parents. • A few people work. • Enjoy your vacation.
How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.
a nice head
Most people travel . Some people stay at home. Some people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
a nice body
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well wor：
• 加首尾，使结构完整。
• 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构， 开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂 亮。
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.
generally speaking,
连
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.
• According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
We go to KFC .
Sometimes we travel.
Sometimes we stay up studying.
We like listening to music.
We study all day.
We play computer games for long.
Teenagers’
初中英语书面表达 写作技巧指导
brainstorm
We study .
We like listening to music. We play computer games for long.
We like reading books.
Teenagers’ colorful life
We often play Sports.
We like reading books.
healthy life
We often play Sports.
Sometimes we travel.
We go to KFC. Sometimes we stay up studying.
审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。
审
健康很重要。在学习和 工作的压力日趋增大的 今天，会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。人们是 如何度过假期的呢？国 际健康组织对此作了一 次调查，右图是他们此 次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息，请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整的 调查报告,并提倡大家 进行假日休闲。
later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end; 9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, actually,
in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
• Most people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
• Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.
连 写作第四步：
• 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清 晰，各个部分衔接自然。
关联词
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor;
2.表示选择: or, either…or; 3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, not…but,
on the one hand…on the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next,
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents
work
列 写作第二步
• 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要
点。
根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句 子列出文章的要点
• 如何度假 • 调查报告 • 倡议假日休闲
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents