写作第二步
列
• 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要 点。
根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句 子列出文章的要点
• 如何度假 • 调查报告 • 倡议假日休闲
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents work
列
• A lot of people travel . • Some people stay at home. • Some other people visit friends or parents. • A few people work. • Enjoy your vacation.
colorful life
We go to KFC . Sometimes we travel. Sometimes we stay up studying.
We like listening to music. We study all day. We play computer games for long.
美
• We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. • According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. • Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Teenagers’
We like reading books. We often play Sports.
healthy life
Sometimes we travel. We go to KFC. Sometimes we stay up studying.
写作第一步
审
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。
审
健康很重要。在学习和 工作的压力日趋增大的 今天，会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。人们是 如何度过假期的呢？国 际健康组织对此作了一 次调查，右图是他们此 次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息，请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整的 调查报告,并提倡大家 进行假日休闲。
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents work
How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.
a nice head
A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
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• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. • A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. • Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.
Skill Two Express in different ways
Our parents really wish us to work hard. Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study. The teenagers like the computers. The teenagers are fond of the computers. We shouldn’t eat junk food. We should stay away from the junk food. When he spoke, he got more excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he got. We should learn English grammar. It’s important to learn English grammar.
写作第五步：
美
• 选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情 况下展示自己的语言功底。
Skill One Make your sentences correct
• • • • • Good good study, day day up. We should do sports aonce a week week once. Saving the environment is our duty. Save be There is going to have a meeting today. achieve I hope I can come true my dream.
初中英语书面表达 写作技巧指导
brainstorm
We like listening to music. We study .
We play computer games for long.
Teenagers’
We like reading books. We often play Sports.
书面表达
• 以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。 • Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型 供参考） • My dream is to be…/to do…/to go… • I enjoy /like/prefer… • To make my dream come true, I … • If my dream comes true…
age One
I have a dream Have you ever watched a bike racing? The riders are cool! Yeah, it’s my dream to be a professional bike rider. I fell in love with bike rider for the first time I rode. Since that, I’ve been riding for 5 years. Some people think it’s dangerous, I don’t think so. During a bike riding, you will be in a high speed and feel the wind rushes quickly. Exciting? That is! To make my dream come true, I’ll practice more after middle school. Also, I’ll watch more bike racing to learn from the riders. I hope my dream will come true, if so, I can enjoy the life I like best.
Let’s pLay the game.
• _____ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. • He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert _____. • We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking. • _____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. _____, he smiled.
连
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. • According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. • Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
书面表达写作技巧
审
列
加
连
美
中考作文评分标准
第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表 达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（1-3分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。