Which is better?
最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。
A B His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.
我认为学英语很有趣。
A
B
I think learning English is interesting.
She is not old enough to carry the…
Writing skills（“写”的技巧）
方法三:妙用关联词
关联词(connection words)
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor 2.表示选择: or, either…or 3.表示转折: but,however,although\though,after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand…on the other hand 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short
连 (connect) 美 (beautify)
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. • According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. • Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
English writing
初中英语新课程标准
7-9年级分别完成三、四、五级目标
五级写作目标：
能根据写作要求，收集，准备素材 能独立起草短文，短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改 能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系 能简单描述人物或事件 能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明
中考英语作文8个常考话题
连(connect)
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. • According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. • Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
I find it really fun to learn English .
我们应该保护环境。
A We should protect the environment.
B
It’s our duty to protect the environment.
Writing skills（“写”的技 巧）
我希望你能帮助我。
A B I wish you can help me. I’m looking forward to your help.
Which is better?
他们很早就到了。
A They arrived early.
B
They arrived as early as they could.
Let’s try
• Though\Although _____________ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. • He didn’t go to movies, he went to instead the concert ______. like • We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking. First he stood up. Then he got out. • _____, Finally\At last _____, Next he went back. ____________, he smiled.
美(beautify)
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Writing skills（“写”的技 巧）
方法一:善用词汇
甚至善用高级词汇
Which is better?
他们在海滩上听音乐。
A B They listened to the music on the beach. They enjoyed the music on the beach.
Which is better?
列(list)
• A lot of people travel. • Some people stay at home. • Some other people visit friends or parents. • A few people work. • Enjoy your vacation.
加(add)
•
• 加首尾，使结构完整。 How do people spend their vacation? We • 可以采取总分总结构，开头或结 made a survey and here is our report. （the beginnin lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. • Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）
一、介绍人和事件
（自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等） 二、介绍地点（旅游等） 三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等） 四、课外生活（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等） 五、假期安排（计划、过去经历等） 六、节假日活动（志愿者活动、过去经历） 七、环境、健康（环保、疾病、食品健康等） 八、个人观点建议（提建议、劝告等）
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents work
列(list)
根据以下关键词及图表用 简单的句子列出文章的要点。
• 如何度假 • 调查报告 • 倡议假日休闲
travel stay at home visit friends or parents work
the body （正文）
basic steps(基本写作步骤) search（审） list（列） add(加: 开头和结尾) connect(连) beautify(美：谚语/例子)
审(search)
健康很重要。在学习和 工作的压力日趋增大的 今天，会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。人们是 如何度过假期的呢？国 际健康组织对此作了一 次调查，右图是他们此 次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息，请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整的 调查报告,并提倡大家 进行假日休闲。
方法二:活用多种句型
她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。
A B She is very young.
She can’t carry the heavy box.