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(范文2) The passage tries to tell us that getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will
benefit us a lot, including a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day.
In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day.
The passage says…… This passage states that… In the writer’s opinion,…… The writer thinks that……
One possible version
The passage says getting up early ____in__th_e__m_o_r_n_in_g_i_s_a_g_o_o_d__h_a_b_it_.It enables us to have__a_b_e_t_te_r_m__em__o_ry_,_h_e_a_lt_h_ie_r_b_o_d_y__ and __b_e_tt_e_r _re_p_a_r_a_ti_o_n_fo_r_t_h_e_d_a_y_.____
If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry.
One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on dance team in college and met a ton of people that way—it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground.
love the college life
why
Get himself active in things
广东高考读写任务
The author, Mike, mainly tells us his first year of college life. At first he
didn’t adjust himself well
How to write a good summary of narration and argument?
Summary / Conclusion
1.Narration : Get the information of six elements and combine them smoothly to form a summary.
1. A strong statement of opinion. (the key idea):
Getting up early /a good habit /of great importance 2. Support for the opinion (supporting sentences)
1.a strong statement of (the topic sentences) opinion. 2.support for the opinion. (supporting
sentences)
3.conclusion/suggestions. (the purpose of the passage)
narration
the six elements of a narrative piece
who when where What (event) How (process) why
Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment. I went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I need to know some basic life skills, such as balancing a check-book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.
frequently.
Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
2. 针对某个问题提出解决方法或措施。 即“问题+解决方法”: The passage tells us...(问题),
including...(方法1), ...(方法2)and...(方 法3).
3. 介绍某现象及其原因和结果。即“现象+原因+结果”: (The author/writer said/talks about)...(现象)of..., because /but...(原因/本质1), and... (原因/本质2).
(范文3) The passage tells us that getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot. It enables us to have a better memory, healthier body and better preparation
2.Argument : First find out the topic sentences , the supporting sentences and the writer’s conclusion and then summarize them.
我们根据说明文的不同类型, 分别给出三种参考模板: 1. 描写某事物的性质功用。即“对象+性质功用+利好”: (In the passage) the writer introduces... (对象)to us, especially its...(性质或功用), from which we know...(对象带来的利好).
Argument
Task 1: Discussion:
1. What is an Argument? 2. What methods to use when writing a
summary of an Argument?
Argument
The parts of an opinion piece
____________________________,
but after getting active in things for one
term, he a_d__a_p__te__d__t_o__i_t and _e_n__j_o_y_e__d__h__im_ .self
congratulations!
the six elements of a narrative piece
who
When/where /What
Mike
His first year of college
How (process)
At first: toughest…adjustment
Then: got used to it At last:
a better memory a healthier body a better preparation for the day 3. Conclusion/suggestions.
a good habit / benefit a lot
Practice
Now let’s make a summary according to the information above using the following set sentence patterns.