科技英语写作unit-8
2) Writing Requirements for Results
• In the section of result, the following two points should be kept in mind.
• First, any data shown in this section must be meaningful. Among all the tested variables, only those that affect the reaction or the conclusion can become the terminating data, while those with no meaningful functions should never appear in this section.
Section of Results:
• The section of results is one of the most important elements in a professional paper, because any research should have an outcome, no matter what it may be. It is in this section that the final results of the paper are presented.
• Second, the presentation of results should be short without verbiage and be of crystal clarity. This is because it is the research result that contains new ingredients of knowledge or findings which the writer can claim as his own contribution to the science world, and that builds the basis for the whole paper of the author. In writing this section, redundancy should be avoided.
• So sorting out and selecting data should be highly necessary. Just as Dr, Jolin Powell, a noted American geologist, says: "The fool collects facts; the wise man selects them."
Topical Highlights:
Section of Results: General function and contents, writing requirements, examples and some useful expressions.
Section of Discussion: General functions and main elements, writing requirements .
• Then, in the section of results, the author(s) should bring about a solid foundation on which the whole paper rests, by boiling down all the facts and data he has gained.
Section of Conclusion: general
functions and main elements,
requirement,
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conclusion and some usefttention: conciseness(1) – using non-finites, using replacement of attributes, using adverbs
1) General Functions and Contents of Results
• The value of a research lies in the value of its final results and the author's interpretation of the results. If the preceding sections of a paper (Introduction, Investigations, Experiments, Calculations, etc.) are designed to explain how the author obtains the results, and the following sections of the paper (Analysis, Discussion, Summary or Conclusion, etc.) are to tell what the results should mean.
• In terms of content, research results are usually presented together with the corresponding analysis concerned.
• So in this section the author should present the essential results and data and then generalize them to a theoretical height. Therefore there are usually two ingredients in the section of results: full presentation of the specific data of the work and detailed analysis of the results (esp. when there is no special section of Data Analysis in the paper).