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How to write based on cartoons?
1. 读图(topics)
2.解意(theme)
3. 谋篇(organization)
Ⅰ.读图:Topics of cartoons
Environmental problems
Attitudes towards life
Topics of cartoons
5. … …
Sentence structures:
1.Reading the cartoon, we think of a common phenomenon of our society. 2.It seems very ridiculous that…However, it is very common in our daily life. 3.The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of… 4.The picture indicates that we…/ Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that…
Picture2
Protect animals. No buying, no killing.
Picture 3
People can’t afford heavy medical fees.
Picture 4
One false move may lose the game. Think twice before we do anything.
Picutre5
Money can’t buy everything. Health is the best wealth.
Picture6
Children suffer from too heavy burden.
Ⅲ.谋篇 ---Organization
Step1. Description
发现问题
The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China.
Example 2
角度 criticize 主旨
Students and parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.
The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China. (facts) School-age country children are often dropping out of school due to poverty. Even those who manage to stay in school are still suffering from the low standards of educational facilities. Comparatively, city children have much better opportunities to receive good education. (results) Thus, schools in the countryside generally have much lower enrollment rates than those in the city, which in turn worsens the problem.
Sentence structures:
As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture,
In the picture, there are…
……
As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture, In the picture, there are… ……
Sentence structures:
1.As far as I’m concerned, /In my opinion, Can you think /From my point of view,… of some 2. It is high time we took some measures sentence structures to form to put an end to this phenomenon./ Immediate measures should your last paragraph?be taken to… 3. The government should make laws to… 4. We should raise people’s awareness of… 5. Everyone should make great efforts to… Only in this way can we…
Let’s have a competition
Judge the themes of the following cartoons as quickly as possible.
Come on! Choose me!
1 4
2 5
3 6
Picture1
People lack communication.
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Hale Waihona Puke Daily SpeechI Shall Not Live In Vain --Emily Dickinson If I can stop one heart from breaking, I shall not live in vain; If I can ease one life the aching, Or cool one pain, Or help one fainting robin Unto his nest again, I shall not live in vain. What’s the theme of the poem?
Sentence structures: 1.Reading the cartoon, we think of a common phenomenon of our society.
2.It seems very ridiculous that…However, it is very common in our daily life. 3.The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of… 4.The picture indicates that we…/ Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that…
Step2 Analysis(联系实际分析)
( facts / reasons/results…)
Clues:描述一下他 们的不同境遇,并
就如何解决此问题
发表你的看法。
(referring to the
given Chinese words)
Indicate: education inequality Facts: drop out of school suffer from low standards of… comparatively better opportunities Results: lower enrollment rates in rural country worsen the problem
Indicate: education inequality Facts: drop out of school suffer from low standards of… comparatively better opportunities Results: lower enrollment rates in rural country worsen the problem
a country boy crying long for education a city boy enjoy all the benefits of modern education
As is vividly shown in the picture, a country boy is crying helplessly in the darkness, longing eagerly for school education. In contrast, the city boy on the right is enjoying all the benefits of modern education .
Step 3 Solutions
(your opinions /suggestions)
the government all citizens Individual (从大到小)
be aware of Only in this way social justice harmonious society (从意识到行动)
cartoon
poster
80% 70% 60% 50% 40% 30% 20% 10% 0%
76% 70% 67% 62%
graph
韩国 日本 美国 中国
photo
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